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What I Could Never Tell My Mother This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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What I could never tell my mother
Isn’t her fault; it’s mine
It’s things wrapped inside of me, coiled like wire with the filament exposed
She could accept them – those things – I’m sure
Maybe even love them the way she loves me; little puzzle pieces
That fell out of the box when we were putting it under the sofa
After we almost finished the puzzle together
But I hide them inside my deepest aorta
Keeping them safe because who wants to grab a still-beating heart?
It would kill me to take those secrets out
So my mother may know they exist
But she lets me keep them.
And maybe that’s the real secret, the one that
Shhhh
She doesn’t know –
It’s that I need some secrets of my own.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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mary G. said...
Apr. 11, 2009 at 1:13 am
This is so amazing!
You are such the writer!
I love how all the other comments say they can relate.
well, it is very relative-is that a word?
:)
 
LilJ<3 said...
Apr. 10, 2009 at 11:11 pm
Margaret, you got quiet a response on the poem! I can see why... its great. Its so true that there are some things we want to keep to ourselves that we dont want other to people to know about...Not having anyone know is what makes it special or unique cause only you know it...I think you did a great job and congrats on getting it published in the mag!
♥ Jackie
 
joshua S. said...
Apr. 9, 2009 at 1:00 am
thats kinda koool.... too dramatic like
 
lovely129713 said...
Apr. 8, 2009 at 11:43 pm
Nice poem. I think we can all relate to it. Everyone has sectrets that they don't want to tell anyone...especially their parents. I do.
 
CheerGirl94 said...
Apr. 7, 2009 at 2:52 pm
This is Amazing i can totally relate!!!! :)
 
mrbananaman9 said...
Apr. 7, 2009 at 1:40 am
I can totally relate
 
CutiePie said...
Apr. 5, 2009 at 6:33 pm
this is so good. i can really relate because i have big secrets of my own
 
angeleyes1995 said...
Apr. 5, 2009 at 5:22 am
I can relate ur peom is beautiful please look at mines and comment tell me how u feel. Thanks
~angel eyes
 
Ashley S. said...
Apr. 1, 2009 at 2:54 am
Excellent work! I've never been able to relate to anything better than this poem.
 
DivaDarling said...
Mar. 31, 2009 at 9:48 pm
This really reminds me of my life I have a lot of secrets I nver told my mom their no private but they mean a lot to me.
 
AKlore said...
Mar. 31, 2009 at 9:35 pm
I loved it! It was flawless and brilliant.
 
stylinsista07 said...
Mar. 31, 2009 at 2:41 pm
good job very well written
 
annkaykay2011 said...
Mar. 31, 2009 at 1:54 am
Deep. It has a nice sharp point of view and formatted very well. :)
 
Miyavi27 said...
Mar. 30, 2009 at 6:36 pm
Good, but lacking some more support...IDK..xD the imagery is spot on and the tone is present but not overpowering...Beaute'
 
Scornedtruth said...
Mar. 27, 2009 at 12:35 am
Wow it's wow
 
Spiffykid2oxo This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 26, 2009 at 8:17 pm
Wow. Eye opening.
 
Zori Bettar said...
Mar. 26, 2009 at 7:32 pm
Very good, and pieced together nicely. I'm almost drawn to it. I had to read it twice =)
 
Renaissance said...
Mar. 24, 2009 at 4:27 am
Very sophisticated and well written.
 
ziziluver91 said...
Mar. 24, 2009 at 12:42 am
This poem is so true and good! i can totally relate to it completely..sometimes they are better off not knowing..
 
project827 said...
Mar. 17, 2009 at 10:54 pm
very good, very good.
 
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