What I Could Never Tell My Mother This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

What I could never tell my mother
Isn’t her fault; it’s mine
It’s things wrapped inside of me, coiled like wire with the filament exposed
She could accept them – those things – I’m sure
Maybe even love them the way she loves me; little puzzle pieces
That fell out of the box when we were putting it under the sofa
After we almost finished the puzzle together
But I hide them inside my deepest aorta
Keeping them safe because who wants to grab a still-beating heart?
It would kill me to take those secrets out
So my mother may know they exist
But she lets me keep them.
And maybe that’s the real secret, the one that
She doesn’t know –
It’s that I need some secrets of my own.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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bmmssm said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 8:54 am
i totaly agree my mom somtimes dosnt understand me 1 bit
BmmsBT said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 7:53 am
I really love this poem. I can really relate to it!!
lostlove16 said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 10:04 am
This is good. I can totally relate
chastity said...
Feb. 24, 2010 at 12:15 pm
This is so good i love it it is relative
RainieLee said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 2:30 pm
I can TOTALLY relate to this. 5 stars.
tibby said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 1:46 pm
thats really good!!! i feel the same way about my mom only i hate her...
CrystalJacquelineRevelation said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 2:17 pm
I can relate...well written. I think it's lovely. : D
twiwrite said...
Feb. 17, 2010 at 2:18 pm
very pretty i love the last 6 stanzas.
zombieattack said...
Feb. 14, 2010 at 8:29 pm
This is so amazing, I can relate so well even when I get a different meaning every time I read it. Fabulous work, dear:)
PoetLaureate07 replied...
Feb. 17, 2010 at 9:38 am
I agree.... this is beautiful!!! Everyone needs a few secrets of their own!!!
hiddenemotions said...
Feb. 11, 2010 at 9:29 pm
Amazing!! is all i can say!!
sedaracapree said...
Feb. 4, 2010 at 8:06 pm
wow. that poem is amazing. ive read it about 30 times. i get a new meaning from it each time. thanks for sharing with us! by the way.... view my new poem. its my first one posted.. but im only 13 so cut me some slack... thanks(:
GreeGree said...
Feb. 3, 2010 at 1:12 am
Those secrets can hurt, they can build us, or they can tear us apart.
Absolutely love this poem. So real...
4evr :) replied...
Feb. 4, 2010 at 5:32 pm
totally agree
lostnhim said...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 7:24 pm
I REALLY like this it is really down to earth...
jessicaconner-ish said...
Jan. 26, 2010 at 9:30 pm
this is soo real.. thats why i like it:)
jessica said...
Jan. 26, 2010 at 8:00 pm
My mom and i have a great bond but there is stuff that i keep in secret and you dont know how much i wish theyll come out.it hurts whenever she asks me whats wrong with me and i say nothing when i really want to let it all out. but someday i will
S1234 said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 8:21 pm
Great work! Very true.
Comment on my work if you get the chance!
heaven(: said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 12:08 pm
amazing so truee girly:)
kep up the good work.
tara* said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 11:52 am
Thank you for this poem. My mom doesn't understand that I don't keep my secrets to hurt her, I keep them because something inside me needs them. Great poem, thank you for saying what some of us can't.
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