Just Me

December 4, 2011
By Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"


Days that I feel like I'm nothing,
Want to be something
No one can feel the vibration of my voice from my head to my toes;
Like I do
Secrets in my head
Pain in my legs
You cant hear me
Maybe because you never take the chance to try and look at me
There's something I need
I need to be Understood
If you could
Please Try
try to get what I'm saying
try and get why I'm crying
try and get why I feel like I'm dying
Every time you hit me
Cant you see
I feel more and more Morose
Like I am the Base of this family
I Yield
I'm done
Its done
You say I'm unkempt
I say I'm clean
You say I'm a disappointment
And again I say but you don't seem to hear, I'm a Achiever
Cause 1
All of the things you say to me could have knocked me down
Cause 2
All of the things that you have hit me with could have gotten me not to stay around
3
All of the times you say I'm a Disappointment and no use to you
4
All the times that I still think its True.
And yet I'm still here
Trying to survive.



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Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 5:07 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

i try to coe from the heart while doing these poems... thank you

Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 5:06 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

thank you.. for understanding.. where i was coming from. :)

on Dec. 14 2011 at 7:14 pm
Luna3952 SILVER, Lynchburg, Virginia
6 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
All is fair in love and war.
Palsm 114
John 3:17

omg! this is really good! i can so relate to you!

on Dec. 14 2011 at 5:56 pm
ashlyn939 PLATINUM, Lynchburg, Virginia
34 articles 14 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love means holding on to someone just as hard as you can because if you don't, one blink and they might disappear... forever." -Ellen Hopkins, Impulse

This is really great. Your writing speaks they're not just black and white words on a screen they give you a picture

Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 14 2011 at 5:11 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

ok... thank you! (for the comment)

on Dec. 14 2011 at 7:44 am
SnehaChatterjee PLATINUM, Kolkata, West Bengal, India, Other
45 articles 2 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Two roads diverged in the woods and I,
I took the one less travelled by,
And that has made all the difference

Wonderful poetry.... never give up u'r a true winner!!

I'd be pleased if u comment on my poetry:)


Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 4:28 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

Yeah i try to bring my poetry from the heart. And thank u very much!

pinkowl BRONZE said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 4:03 pm
pinkowl BRONZE, Tyrone, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
Jeremiah 29:11

LOVE IT. i love how personal it is!




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