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Days that I feel like I'm nothing,
Want to be something
No one can feel the vibration of my voice from my head to my toes;
Like I do
Secrets in my head
Pain in my legs
You cant hear me
Maybe because you never take the chance to try and look at me
There's something I need
I need to be Understood
If you could
Please Try
try to get what I'm saying
try and get why I'm crying
try and get why I feel like I'm dying
Every time you hit me
Cant you see
I feel more and more Morose
Like I am the Base of this family
I Yield
I'm done
Its done
You say I'm unkempt
I say I'm clean
You say I'm a disappointment
And again I say but you don't seem to hear, I'm a Achiever
Cause 1
All of the things you say to me could have knocked me down
Cause 2
All of the things that you have hit me with could have gotten me not to stay around
3
All of the times you say I'm a Disappointment and no use to you
4
All the times that I still think its True.
And yet I'm still here
Trying to survive.





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Luna3952 said...
Dec. 14, 2011 at 7:14 pm
omg! this is really good! i can so relate to you!
 
Zahria replied...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 5:07 pm
i try to coe from the heart while doing these poems... thank you
 
beachgal123 said...
Dec. 14, 2011 at 5:56 pm
This is really great. Your writing speaks they're not just black and white words on a screen they give you a picture
 
Zahria replied...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 5:06 pm
thank you.. for understanding.. where i was coming from. :)
 
SnehaChatterjee This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 14, 2011 at 7:44 am

Wonderful poetry.... never give up u'r a true winner!!

I'd be pleased if u comment on my poetry:)

 
Zahria replied...
Dec. 14, 2011 at 5:11 pm
ok... thank you! (for the comment)
 
pinkowl said...
Dec. 13, 2011 at 4:03 pm
LOVE IT. i love how personal it is!
 
Zahria replied...
Dec. 13, 2011 at 4:28 pm
Yeah i try to bring my poetry from the heart. And thank u very much!
 
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