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On the outside
He appears quite sane
A little shy
A little lonely
But otherwise immune to pain
Being generally ignored
By others
Has made him lead
A purely theoretical life
But his psychopathic nightmares
Have a dark internal meaning
Underneath the surface
A trigger happy
Pistol junkie
Waits, gun in hand

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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cass said...
Dec. 10, 2009 at 7:59 pm:
uber scary! way mysterious i really liked it. you are great. keep writing <3
 
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one_of_a_kind_girl said...
Jul. 11, 2009 at 5:49 am:
one word: wow. :)
 
dd1995 replied...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 1:13 pm :
yaya woot woot i agree. :^)
 
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despurlock This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 22, 2009 at 6:56 pm:
Wow! Truely awesome. I love the mystery to it. Please check out some of my poems and let me know what you think! Thanks so much! KeepWriting!
 
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Lainee said...
Jun. 16, 2009 at 11:31 pm:
It's scarry, how accurate that poem is. Shows warning of something that happens too often. Shows how fake an appearence can be, when other's scorn at originality.
 
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tigeress3 said...
Jun. 3, 2009 at 10:03 pm:
Makes me shiver, in a good way!
 
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