Demon's calling

December 6, 2011
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constantly being bullied

on the verge of tears

battle after battle

holding them back


burning hatred

on the inside

holding back my demon

bursting from within


no more can i stand it

letting my inner demon out

swearing my vengeance

I'll never rest will I get them all





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MoraleAsh said...
Jan. 6, 2012 at 10:00 pm
Hm, I like it but I don't. I like the whole figurative language with the demons and such but I feel as if I've heard it all before. I've heard and read the same kind of figurative language before. Maybe try adding your own unique details to make your work stand out more.
 
Goddess replied...
Jan. 17, 2012 at 4:41 pm
my poems all have a part of me in it
 
MoraleAsh replied...
Jan. 17, 2012 at 6:51 pm
of course it does. everyone's work has pieces of them in it. what i meant to say..well...bluntly: it's generic. try something new. i like reading the same material as much as i like watching reruns- i simply don't. do you get where i'm coming from?
 
applesauceHater said...
Jan. 5, 2012 at 11:48 pm
title drew me to it. it's nice. something most people can compare as we all try to hold back our demons
 
BrokenBree said...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 3:14 pm
Interesting poem, I love the title, and this was altogether a good poem. (: Check out my stuff?
 
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