Demon's calling

December 6, 2011
By Goddess PLATINUM, Connellsville, Pennsylvania
Goddess PLATINUM, Connellsville, Pennsylvania
27 articles 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today.”


constantly being bullied

on the verge of tears

battle after battle

holding them back


burning hatred

on the inside

holding back my demon

bursting from within


no more can i stand it

letting my inner demon out

swearing my vengeance

I'll never rest will I get them all


The author's comments:
i was angry and i wrote how i felt.

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on Jan. 17 2012 at 6:51 pm
PhoenixCrossing GOLD, Tinley Park, Illinois
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of course it does. everyone's work has pieces of them in it. what i meant to say..well...bluntly: it's generic. try something new. i like reading the same material as much as i like watching reruns- i simply don't. do you get where i'm coming from?

on Jan. 17 2012 at 4:41 pm
Goddess PLATINUM, Connellsville, Pennsylvania
27 articles 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today.”

my poems all have a part of me in it

on Jan. 6 2012 at 10:00 pm
PhoenixCrossing GOLD, Tinley Park, Illinois
14 articles 0 photos 179 comments
Hm, I like it but I don't. I like the whole figurative language with the demons and such but I feel as if I've heard it all before. I've heard and read the same kind of figurative language before. Maybe try adding your own unique details to make your work stand out more.

on Jan. 5 2012 at 11:48 pm
applesauceHater SILVER, Nikolaevsk, Alaska
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title drew me to it. it's nice. something most people can compare as we all try to hold back our demons

Loftus GOLD said...
on Dec. 27 2011 at 3:14 pm
Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
11 articles 1 photo 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own, and you know what you know. And you are the one who'll decide where you'll go." -Dr. Seuss

Interesting poem, I love the title, and this was altogether a good poem. (: Check out my stuff?


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