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Blond hair
Curly to straight
Color changing eyes
Green to brown
He keeps me guessing
I feel like I'm floating and i wanna get down.
It's I'mpossible to ignore hI'm
Cause he stole what i hid
he has my heart.
Oh look what he did
He makes me laugh
He makes me smile
I say I don't like hI'm that way
But I know I'm in denial.
we argue for fun
we text non-stop
It's like I'm the earth and hes the sun.
we have names for each other
we like the same stuff
so why am I undercover.



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BloglessBlogger said...
May 29, 2012 at 4:09 pm
This just flows, confusing, but it flows. It is also very relatable.
 
IMAdreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 7:25 pm
I can feel the confusion, very well written!
 
Devils.Angel said...
Mar. 16, 2012 at 2:30 pm
I love this because u can rlly feel the feelings they have for each other
 
Iamhere4u This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 20, 2012 at 2:08 pm
Luv this one...
 
illusions replied...
Feb. 22, 2012 at 3:16 pm
thank you for commenting
 
PoetryAngel14 said...
Feb. 16, 2012 at 9:32 pm
Wow great job. Great flow, great rhyme, great words :) i think it's your best so far. Rated 5
 
illusions replied...
Feb. 22, 2012 at 3:15 pm
wow thanks! i wrote this when i i was 12.
 
PoetryAngel14 replied...
Feb. 22, 2012 at 8:00 pm
really?? Impressive
 
illusions replied...
Mar. 16, 2012 at 2:15 pm

Thanx !!! haha

 

 
PoetryAngel14 replied...
Mar. 18, 2012 at 9:17 am
haha no prob
 
SpringMoon98 said...
Dec. 20, 2011 at 3:00 pm
This is really good and I agree it does flow naturally
 
youngspeare said...
Dec. 11, 2011 at 5:52 am
I read your poem a loud and i said to myself it flows so naturally, that's what i loved best about it. Keep posting :) 
Please check out my poem "Ghosts of the Past" and rate/comment? Would really appreciate it!
 
illusions replied...
Dec. 20, 2011 at 2:24 pm
Thanxz and i will
 
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