Undercover

November 7, 2011
By illusions GOLD, I Dontg Even Like This Town, Other
illusions GOLD, I Dontg Even Like This Town, Other
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Blond hair
Curly to straight
Color changing eyes
Green to brown
He keeps me guessing
I feel like I'm floating and i wanna get down.
It's I'mpossible to ignore hI'm
Cause he stole what i hid
he has my heart.
Oh look what he did
He makes me laugh
He makes me smile
I say I don't like hI'm that way
But I know I'm in denial.
we argue for fun
we text non-stop
It's like I'm the earth and hes the sun.
we have names for each other
we like the same stuff
so why am I undercover.



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on May. 29 2012 at 4:09 pm
BloglessBlogger GOLD, Somerset, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep keep you from playing the game."

This just flows, confusing, but it flows. It is also very relatable.

on Apr. 6 2012 at 7:25 pm
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

I can feel the confusion, very well written!

on Mar. 18 2012 at 9:17 am
PoetryAngel14 PLATINUM, Ithaca, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Dare to be imperfect and one day there will tug at your sleeve a soulmate." ~Robert Brault
"Life is like riding a bicycle - in order to keep your balance, you must keep moving." ~Albert Einstein

haha no prob

on Mar. 16 2012 at 2:30 pm
Devils.Angel GOLD, Drumheller, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"all good ppl die young"
"a lawful kiss is never worth a stolen one"

I love this because u can rlly feel the feelings they have for each other

illusions GOLD said...
on Mar. 16 2012 at 2:15 pm
illusions GOLD, I Dontg Even Like This Town, Other
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Thanx !!! haha

 


on Feb. 22 2012 at 8:00 pm
PoetryAngel14 PLATINUM, Ithaca, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Dare to be imperfect and one day there will tug at your sleeve a soulmate." ~Robert Brault
"Life is like riding a bicycle - in order to keep your balance, you must keep moving." ~Albert Einstein

really?? Impressive

illusions GOLD said...
on Feb. 22 2012 at 3:16 pm
illusions GOLD, I Dontg Even Like This Town, Other
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thank you for commenting

illusions GOLD said...
on Feb. 22 2012 at 3:15 pm
illusions GOLD, I Dontg Even Like This Town, Other
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wow thanks! i wrote this when i i was 12.

on Feb. 20 2012 at 2:08 pm
Scribbler-of-Dreams PLATINUM, Brandon, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Love isn't everything we want, but it's everything we need....

Luv this one...

on Feb. 16 2012 at 9:32 pm
PoetryAngel14 PLATINUM, Ithaca, New York
26 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dare to be imperfect and one day there will tug at your sleeve a soulmate." ~Robert Brault
"Life is like riding a bicycle - in order to keep your balance, you must keep moving." ~Albert Einstein

Wow great job. Great flow, great rhyme, great words :) i think it's your best so far. Rated 5

on Dec. 20 2011 at 3:00 pm
SpringMoon98 GOLD, Ava, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Everyone wants to change the world, but do they ever stop to think about changing themselves?"
Leo Tolstoy

This is really good and I agree it does flow naturally

illusions GOLD said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 2:24 pm
illusions GOLD, I Dontg Even Like This Town, Other
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Thanxz and i will

on Dec. 11 2011 at 5:52 am
youngspeare BRONZE, Nairobi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
We wouldn't ask a rose that grew from the concrete for having damaged petals; in turn we'd all celebrate its tenacity, we'd all love tz will to reach the sun well we are the roses n these are my damaged petals don't ask me why thank God and ask me how

I read your poem a loud and i said to myself it flows so naturally, that's what i loved best about it. Keep posting :) 
Please check out my poem "Ghosts of the Past" and rate/comment? Would really appreciate it!


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