Love You

November 23, 2011
By Gods-little-writer BRONZE, Springfield, Missouri
Gods-little-writer BRONZE, Springfield, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
light can't drive out darkness only darkness can do that, love cannot drive out hate only hate can do that.


His smile get's me every time,
His eyes make my heart melt,
He hugged me then shattered my heart,
I loved him and miss him,
My friends were there for me every time,
They told me he doesn't deserve me.
I missed him and loved me not any more.
He is long gone probably with another girl.
I wish her luck with that cold heated jerk.
So long and good riddance for my heart is whole my wounds are filled I wish you luck with your black hole soul.

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on Dec. 10 2011 at 2:00 pm
Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
108 articles 2 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And the Lamb at the center of the throne will be their Shepherd. He will guide them to springs of living water; and God will wipe away every tear from their eyes." Revelation 7:17

i think you should use something else for the word "heart" in either line 2 or 3. its a little repetetive. the line "i missed him and loved me not anymore" doesnt really make sense. i can sense the passion in the poem though and i always love that. keep writing!


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