Love You

November 23, 2011
His smile get's me every time,
His eyes make my heart melt,
He hugged me then shattered my heart,
I loved him and miss him,
My friends were there for me every time,
They told me he doesn't deserve me.
I missed him and loved me not any more.
He is long gone probably with another girl.
I wish her luck with that cold heated jerk.
So long and good riddance for my heart is whole my wounds are filled I wish you luck with your black hole soul.

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MsAnonymous This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 10, 2011 at 2:00 pm
i think you should use something else for the word "heart" in either line 2 or 3. its a little repetetive. the line "i missed him and loved me not anymore" doesnt really make sense. i can sense the passion in the poem though and i always love that. keep writing!
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