Love You

November 23, 2011
By Gods-little-writer BRONZE, Springfield, Missouri
Gods-little-writer BRONZE, Springfield, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
light can't drive out darkness only darkness can do that, love cannot drive out hate only hate can do that.

- MLK


His smile get's me every time,
His eyes make my heart melt,
He hugged me then shattered my heart,
I loved him and miss him,
My friends were there for me every time,
They told me he doesn't deserve me.
I missed him and loved me not any more.
He is long gone probably with another girl.
I wish her luck with that cold heated jerk.
So long and good riddance for my heart is whole my wounds are filled I wish you luck with your black hole soul.



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on Dec. 10 2011 at 2:00 pm
Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"And the Lamb at the center of the throne will be their Shepherd. He will guide them to springs of living water; and God will wipe away every tear from their eyes." Revelation 7:17

i think you should use something else for the word "heart" in either line 2 or 3. its a little repetetive. the line "i missed him and loved me not anymore" doesnt really make sense. i can sense the passion in the poem though and i always love that. keep writing!


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