Our Story

November 30, 2011
Dreams have became my reality,
I have lost all my mentality.
I see you two,
And then I see us boo.
I gave you my heart,
But then you tore it apart.
I show you my smile, it's so fake.
But, it was always yours to take.
I thought you'd be mine forever.
And we'd always be together.
Whatever happened to the glow you said you saw upon my face?
Look at me, you've turned me into a mental case.
Do you see how much this is killing me?
Wondering, if this is all we'll ever be.
You, the words I script.
And, me, the dirt you kick.

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Aaka131 said...
Feb. 9, 2012 at 6:06 pm
I also would have to disagree with the use of the word "boo", but other than that its great! I really like it and it is easy to relate to for sure.
MsAnonymous This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 11, 2011 at 2:28 pm
i love this poem because so many can relate! i would avoid using the word "boo". and also the syllables are awkward in some places.
KWeiberg321 replied...
Dec. 11, 2011 at 2:32 pm
Thanks for the honesty. (: & I know. I just kind of tossed 'boo' in there to rhyme with too. I was trying to maintain the same rhyme scheme through out the poem.
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