The Sun Rise

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When Sun breaks out of the cage of Night
Creatures that crawl and scurry flee back to their shadowy holes
Then Humans and Animals alike step out of their own tiny dwellings
And look

They look for Danger and Wrath
When they know that they are gone
The sound of evil stirs
As it readies itself to trap Sun again





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ilovewriting95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 9:37 pm
Cool poem! You were right, it is amazing! Good job! P.S. I love your author's note about your bus stop. That totally made me laugh. That's awesome! :)
 
ilovewriting95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 9:39 pm
P.P.S. I love both quotes on your profile. So true... lol...
 
Nick5 replied...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 9:50 am
There is only one quote on my profile. It's the one about the girls being confusing.
 
Nick5 replied...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 5:48 pm
Oh, and if you liked this read other stuff by me. I can be a very uplifting and dark guy (the dark stuff is still pending though).
 
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