Remnants of Rejection

December 3, 2011
It’s all so distant when you step away.
When the heart isn't yours,
There’s no reason to sway.

But then It comes to home,
A Prodigal Demon,
Cold and probing,
Nothing can save you.

Sweet nothings lose meaning.
You are helpless against the passion

and following pain.

Helpless. Loveless. Heartless. Comfortless.

that most cold suffix.

Spare the drama,
Still trying to process
How I’m dying inside,
Because you were so tactless.

You eat my thoughts
And r*** my dreams,
You leave no marks

But my silent screams—
Nothing to indicate
Your crimes that obliterate;
You smother me

And I hate you.

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Luv2WriteNO1 said...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 2:09 pm
Feel free to comment on my stuff! By the way I don't usually read a lot of deep poems, but this poem was very deep! I LOVED it!
Luv2WriteNO1 said...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 2:07 pm
Wow! This is amazing!
SecretSasha said...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 1:14 pm
I really liked this and I can totally relate.
NovaStar said...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 11:57 am
This was so great! I totally know this feeling and the way you put into words was amazing :) Keep up the good work and please check out some of my stuff sometime!
LifeIsPoetry said...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 10:26 am
Such passion in these words! I have never had an experience quite as terrible as yours, but I felt like I knew the emotions as I read. Keep writing! Maybe you can review some of my poetry?
youngspeare said...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 6:50 am
wow! Nicely written! I'm liking it. Keep writing. :) p.s awesome title. 
Please check out my poem "Ghosts of the Past" and rate/comment? Would appreciate it!
MadyBoo said...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 1:28 pm
Absolutly Amazing! Love It! Check Out My Stuff Sometime!(:
SmilesAndOceans replied...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 6:58 pm
I will! :) Thank you so much.
MadyBoo replied...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 10:33 pm
I was like amazed by this! I was all :O omg! LOVE! :))
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