How You Left

December 3, 2011
By ArielleArmageddon PLATINUM, Charlotte, North Carolina
ArielleArmageddon PLATINUM, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
if i cant hear your heartbeat, you're too far away


I can't believe I'm actually saying goodbye
with the ashes of what we were in front of me
it was just the other day
that i remember...
it was your smiling face,
you were smiling at me
and now today i say so long
to never see you again.
and maybe one day you'll smile again,
but it wont be at me.
not even if i prayed.
not even if i cried,
not even if i begged you to stay...
today you still take your leave...
far away from me.
far away from everything and everyone.
today you're just getting up and leaving.
leaving me behind,
did you not realize that
as you walked away?
i was on my knees,
but you wouldn't stay
so this is goodbye, i see
what is it that made you so unhappy here?
was it me?
was it us?
because the life you left behind
wasn't much for complaining
so what was it
that made you drop it all
and take a chance out there
without me?
because today i stand here
staring at the tire tracks in the driveway
you were in such a rush,
why did you keep your plan so hushed?
because today you left me here alone
in a house, no longer home



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on Dec. 25 2011 at 8:36 pm
ArielleArmageddon PLATINUM, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
if i cant hear your heartbeat, you're too far away

im sorry to hear that =(

on Dec. 25 2011 at 8:36 pm
ArielleArmageddon PLATINUM, Charlotte, North Carolina
45 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
if i cant hear your heartbeat, you're too far away

aw thank you so much

on Dec. 25 2011 at 8:36 pm
ArielleArmageddon PLATINUM, Charlotte, North Carolina
45 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
if i cant hear your heartbeat, you're too far away

thank you, i have

on Dec. 24 2011 at 4:01 pm
Luna3952 SILVER, Lynchburg, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
All is fair in love and war.
Palsm 114
John 3:17

reminds me of my ex boyfriend michael... :,(

dalty PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 9:11 pm
dalty PLATINUM, Gaithersburg, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
That at a certain point in our lives, we lose control of what's happening to us, and our lives become controlled by fate. That's the world's greatest lie." - Paulo Coelho

i like this! haha

and yeah my favorite part in this is the last to lines :)


Tomboy GOLD said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 9:32 am
Tomboy GOLD, Broken Arrow, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"The human heart had hidden treasures; in secret kept; in silence sealed; the thoughts; the hopes; the dreams; the pleasures; whose charms were broken if revealed" - Charlotte Bronte

this is good :)  i especially like the two ending lines.   can you check oiut my work?  thanx :D 




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