Beautiful

November 27, 2011
By RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?


In boxer shorts and an oversized T-shirt
I feel beautiful
Not the pretty dress with the rose on it
My hair isn't even brushed
But I feel beautiful
Of course I could never let you see me like this
I would need make-up
And atleast a bottle of hairspray
Because that's what makes me beautiful to you
When I'm not alone
What I think doesn't matter
How I feel doesn't matter

But at night like this
When I'm all alone
I can be myself
This is my turn
This is my time
To be beautiful.



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on Dec. 8 2011 at 3:32 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

haha yay! thx. i wasnt really even trying for structure. i wrote this in like 4 minutes. thank yo so much :)

ninja17 SILVER said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 8:00 pm
ninja17 SILVER, Las Cruces, New Mexico
6 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes we tend to be in despair when the person we love leaves us, but the truth is, it's not our loss, but theirs, for they left the only person who wouldn't give up on them."

I love it! Especially the structure of it. All the words flowed :) I enjoyed it!

on Dec. 7 2011 at 6:29 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

wow thank you so much jacobius. i like the quote btw :)

on Dec. 7 2011 at 3:34 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

Ok, I'm a guy, but I get it.  I hate how people have to be alone in order to truly be themselves...

“Sincerity is the luxury allowed, like diadems and authority, only to the highest rank.... Every man alone is sincere. At the entrance of a second person, hypocrisy begins.” – Ralph Waldo Emerson



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