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In boxer shorts and an oversized T-shirt
I feel beautiful
Not the pretty dress with the rose on it
My hair isn't even brushed
But I feel beautiful
Of course I could never let you see me like this
I would need make-up
And atleast a bottle of hairspray
Because that's what makes me beautiful to you
When I'm not alone
What I think doesn't matter
How I feel doesn't matter

But at night like this
When I'm all alone
I can be myself
This is my turn
This is my time
To be beautiful.





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ninja17 said...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 8:00 pm
I love it! Especially the structure of it. All the words flowed :) I enjoyed it!
 
BreakingBrooke replied...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 3:32 pm
haha yay! thx. i wasnt really even trying for structure. i wrote this in like 4 minutes. thank yo so much :)
 
Lord-Flavius-Jacobius-Ossummuss said...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 3:34 pm

Ok, I'm a guy, but I get it.  I hate how people have to be alone in order to truly be themselves...

“Sincerity is the luxury allowed, like diadems and authority, only to the highest rank.... Every man alone is sincere. At the entrance of a second person, hypocrisy begins.” – Ralph Waldo Emerson

 
BreakingBrooke replied...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 6:29 pm
wow thank you so much jacobius. i like the quote btw :)
 
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