Haiku Kinda :)

November 27, 2011
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Look into the sky
Think about how high
You can go
Then look down low
Your standing on the ground
Not nothing round
Or something that makes a lot of sound
Just the hard rock solid ground
The trees everywhere
And the wind in the air
Breezing through your hair
If were at the beach
Sand through your toes
Wave Swift on and on
Sun beaming down on you
Don't you want some of that to ?!
I know you do
Just gone head tell the truth!..





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pinkowl said...
Dec. 13, 2011 at 4:06 pm
AWESOME ILLUSIONS!
 
Zahria replied...
Dec. 13, 2011 at 4:11 pm
hahahaha thanks i was just fooling around.
 
DrowningInTheBrooke said...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 9:39 pm
i hae no idea how this is a haiku but it IS very good :)
 
Zahria replied...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 9:45 pm
lolx thats why i said kinda lolx
 
Zahria replied...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 9:47 pm
thank you very much
 
Illuminatus said...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 9:19 pm

it is quite nice and i think you wrote well ... just an advice , next time try to do away with the grammatical mistakes like the last line ... keep up the good work !!!! :)

 

 
Zahria replied...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 9:22 pm
thanks for the tip... will keep in mind!
 
romancer2 said...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 4:24 pm
I didn't really like it...
 
Zahria replied...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 5:14 pm
i dont really care !!! SORRY ... IDK U
 
DrowningInTheBrooke replied...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 9:38 pm
XD omg Zahria!!!!! LOL!!!!!!!
 
Zahria replied...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 5:04 pm
lolx im just telling it like it is!
 
reader123 said...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 4:10 pm
nice :) u did great!
 
Zahria replied...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 4:12 pm
lol i was just fooling around... thank you !!
 
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