Magazine, website & books written by teens since 1989

Confused

Custom User Avatar
More by this author
Your my greatest dream but my biggest
Nightmare,
Your the reason i cant sleep at
Night,
Your the only way i
Feel,
Your the real reason i m
Here,
You break me, you build me,
And
Dont get how much i
Care!





Join the Discussion

This article has 8 comments. Post your own now!

stephjbean said...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 8:27 am
Keep writing, your poem echo's my current unrequited love. Awesome voice.
 
Kat H. replied...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 9:36 pm
Awe, well thanks i'm glad to hear you like it.
 
seeitasitmay said...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 8:59 pm
I would like it a lot more if you used *you're
 
Kat H. replied...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 9:21 pm
Maybe i wrote it like that but just put your sorry... :/
 
seeitasitmay replied...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 1:46 pm

Sorry if this posts twice; I'm having internet problems. I can't really understand your reply but I think you're requesting I apologize for my comment on your usage of incorrect grammar. I'm afraid I will not. I liked your poem; it has nice rhythm and a relatable topic. That being said however, I think it is quite obvious that the use of "your" instead of "you're" is not purposeful. My only point in the comment was not to just chide but to encourage you to be more serious and careful with you... (more »)

 
Kat H. replied...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 9:35 pm
I wasn't asking you to say sorry i said sorry for not writing it out the way i wrote it you're is what i meant but instead i put your and i didnt mean to... I enjoy that fact of hearing i could do better and i will work on it. :) thanks so much
 
shaq96 said...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 5:39 pm
Hey I like it your good!
 
Kat H. replied...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 5:56 pm
Awee thanks....it comes to me and i write like crazy!
 
bRealTime banner ad on the left side
Site Feedback