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Confused
Your my greatest dream but my biggest
Nightmare,
Your the reason i cant sleep at
Night,
Your the only way i
Feel,
Your the real reason i m
Here,
You break me, you build me,
And
Dont get how much i
Care!
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Sorry if this posts twice; I'm having internet problems. I can't really understand your reply but I think you're requesting I apologize for my comment on your usage of incorrect grammar. I'm afraid I will not. I liked your poem; it has nice rhythm and a relatable topic. That being said however, I think it is quite obvious that the use of "your" instead of "you're" is not purposeful. My only point in the comment was not to just chide but to encourage you to be more serious and careful with your writing. If you are a serious writer, or intend to be, you will often be criticized for much worse. Some people will tell you that they do not like your writing at all; will you demand that they apologize? I certainly hope not. I work as an intern editor for a magazine and my work is constantly nit-picked by my superior but rather than walk away with hurt feelings, I improve my work. I hope you do the same and continue your work.
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