I Remember Her

December 1, 2011

I remember the promise of the embrace we once shared,
And I remember the cold emptiness she left behind.
I remember the warm feel of her hand in mine,
And I remember the sting of it on my face.
I remember the sweetness of her voice,
And I remember the cut of her words.
I remember our wonderful nights,
And I remember our last night.
I remember her joyful moods,
And I remember her worst.
I remember her,
And I wish I didn't.



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on Mar. 29 2012 at 4:08 pm
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
I'd rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn't do.
-Red Scott

Once again, amazing-stunning in its simplicity!

Lovejuice GOLD said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 12:36 pm
Lovejuice GOLD,
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Thanks for the read Ash. I'm still not entirely happy with this poem, but I'm glad you are. ^_^

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on Feb. 2 2012 at 6:47 pm
-Ash- SILVER, Redmond, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
She wants to die. She wants to disappear, to be remembered no more. She wants so terribly to be forgotten, all her mistakes, all her failures, everything. Her name to be wiped free from all record of existence. Because is it really existing when you’ve got nothing to show for your life?

awesome poem! loved how it flowed! gj!

on Feb. 1 2012 at 8:00 pm
ToraToriTora PLATINUM, Gilbert, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
“Imagination is more important than knowledge. For knowledge is limited to all we now know and understand, while imagination embraces the entire world, and all there ever will be to know and understand.”
-Albert Einstein

Ah x) okay

Lovejuice GOLD said...
on Feb. 1 2012 at 6:17 pm
Lovejuice GOLD,
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The words are just a placeholder. ^_^ I'm in a great relationships, and where this poem came from, I don't know. O_o

on Feb. 1 2012 at 12:40 pm
ToraToriTora PLATINUM, Gilbert, Arizona
21 articles 12 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Imagination is more important than knowledge. For knowledge is limited to all we now know and understand, while imagination embraces the entire world, and all there ever will be to know and understand.”
-Albert Einstein

"It is better to have loved and lost, than to never love at all." I see you don't agree with this?

Lovejuice GOLD said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 1:34 pm
Lovejuice GOLD,
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Whoo! You enjoyed it! I'm hoping that this poem will get a little more attention, because the more I read it, and the more people who see it, the more I like it. It seems to look better and better every time I read it...

on Jan. 29 2012 at 1:47 pm
U2_Fanatic GOLD, Westbury, Other
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[Speechless. Yet again.]

Lovejuice GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 9:44 pm
Lovejuice GOLD,
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Thank you for reading!

Allure GOLD said...
on Jan. 6 2012 at 7:53 pm
Allure GOLD, Fort Worth, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
The only thing to fear is fear it slef

Beautiful!

on Jan. 4 2012 at 3:04 pm
InvisibleHeart GOLD, Barony, Other
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This is really sweet, Love. Your style of writing is very good. I enjoyed this poem very much. Great job!

on Jan. 3 2012 at 1:06 pm
waterbendercarorain GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

thats really good lj

Lovejuice GOLD said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 12:54 pm
Lovejuice GOLD,
19 articles 0 photos 55 comments
I was going to polish the poem more before I submitted it to the site, but I was goaded into posting it before I thought it was ready. I'm glad you still liked it despite the mistakes that were left. Hopefully I can make up for what few disappointments were here in one of my other poems?

Lovejuice GOLD said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 12:49 pm
Lovejuice GOLD,
19 articles 0 photos 55 comments
Thank you for reading! I'm glad you liked the structure of the poem. It was really the only thing I was aiming for in the whole thing. Everybody else seems to think it was the message, but that was really just a placeholder.

on Jan. 1 2012 at 9:41 pm
HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Theres so many that I can't pick sorry

Just beautiful Lj it reminds me of my first relationship I still hold her close to me

on Dec. 23 2011 at 8:22 pm
Tbug1997 PLATINUM, Bloomsburg, Pennsylvania
29 articles 1 photo 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
When in doubt... Blame it on your siblings
when life gives you skittles throw them at random people and yell FEEL THE RAINBOW

Eastep I love it i never thought you would or could write anything like this its wonderful

on Dec. 23 2011 at 7:46 pm
Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
108 articles 2 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And the Lamb at the center of the throne will be their Shepherd. He will guide them to springs of living water; and God will wipe away every tear from their eyes." Revelation 7:17

this almost made me cry... it really strikes the heart. i didnt like the lines about her moods... they didnt really fit somehow. but i can really relate to it. i love the sadness looming around the words

on Dec. 20 2011 at 11:22 am
Autumn_Ecstasy, Amberg, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"You may be surprised how much an idea can seem like a plethora of garbage one day and a pirate’s treasure the next."--Shawn Milke

I really like this and I like how the words are organized to look. It's really realitable (for me at least) and this is going in my favroites! Love it.

on Dec. 6 2011 at 6:51 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

Ever play Age of Empires? I do, so I can be my big Dark Ages guy, and actually do those things. :)

on Dec. 6 2011 at 2:24 pm
Paradise_Lost BRONZE, Mountville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
But paradise is locked and bolted; we must make a journey around the world to see if the back door has, perhaps, been left open.

Swearing is the last refuge of the imaginitively bankrupt.

See, this is why we made you upload these things to TI. They're amazing. *Sits with popcorn and watches the fangirl group grow*




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