Not Even

December 1, 2011
By Msoccer10 BRONZE, Troy, Michigan
Msoccer10 BRONZE, Troy, Michigan
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Not Even
By Michael Muczynski

Not even enough to pass
Words that harass
Not fast enough to play
Not worthy to pray
What can I say?
I don’t meet the standards
I’m a failure
A disgrace
Can’t keep up with the pace
Who could even care?
Or ask how I fare?
All I get are glares
And stares
And snares
I'm nothing
A waste of matter
Everyday feeling flatter
Why am I here?
What can I do?
Is it possible?
Is it true?
Could I mean something to you?

The author's comments:
I felt very curios to know if anyone truly cared about me.

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on Dec. 4 2011 at 9:28 pm
otherpoet SILVER, Wayland, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone." - Audrey Hepburn

I love this poem because I can relate to it. I really like how you question the reader throughout your writing. I hope you write more!

on Dec. 4 2011 at 2:58 pm
VivarieX BRONZE, Negaunee, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
I know who I was when I woke up this morning, but I think I must have changed many times since then.
If you don't know where your going, and road will get you there.
Who in the world am I? Ah, that's the greatest puzzle
~Lewis Carroll~

Love it! Hope you write more ^^

Inksy SILVER said...
on Dec. 4 2011 at 1:20 pm
Inksy SILVER, NSL, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Three can keep a secret if two of them are dead"
~Benjamin Frankiln
"Love? Above all things I believe in love. Love is like oxygen. Love is a many splendored thing. Love lifts us up where we belong. All you need is love."
~Moulin Rouge

This is so dang cute (: The words were beautiful, it flowed perfectly, and it shows your amazing talent! Great job Msoccer10!

Also, do you think your could check out some of my work?


on Dec. 3 2011 at 10:50 pm
my_poetry BRONZE, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
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Aww, this is a great poem! I don't know if you're like me, and write from a mixture of what you feel and what you see, but I really hope you don't feel like this! I promise you, and I can promise anybody, that every second of your life someone cares about you. No matter how much you try to deny it.

Matice BRONZE said...
on Dec. 3 2011 at 9:51 pm
Matice BRONZE, O&#39Fallon, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Maria, first, let me say that you will most certainly regret it. Second, let me say that I'm in."-Smith

Aw, I really liked that! The wording was good, and it flowed very smoothly. You did a good job. You're really talented. Keep writing!

Could you please take a look at some of my work and rate/comment? I'd really appreciate it!





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