Traitor

December 1, 2011
By Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
14 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live as if you'll die today. Dream as if you'll live forever.


I wonder how they know who my crush is,
Oh right of course, you told them.
No? Huh,funny that.

I wonder how they know the code on my lock,
Huh, oh yeah, you opened your trap.
Sorry? What was that? Okay then.

And I wonder, how they know where I live,
so they can lob rotten eggs at my window
I never told them. I don't remember telling anyone else.

I wonder why you suddenly became their newest best friend,
when you used to whimper with terror at the sight of them
now you're just another clone.

You used to tell me we'd be friends forever,
that we'd never grow apart, but now you have gone astray
and have left me on the sidelines.

You've betrayed me and now I can't trust you,
for you have broken our bond of friendship,
and that can never be repaired.

So, go and play with your new little 'friends'
go and sabotage the only true friendship you have.
Go on, you using, manipulating traitor.

The author's comments:
This is written from experience.

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Neytiri GOLD said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 7:43 am
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
14 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live as if you'll die today. Dream as if you'll live forever.

Of course I remember you hun!!!! Thanks babe!! I'd love to check out your work!! <3 x x x

on Dec. 9 2011 at 6:54 am
youngspeare BRONZE, Nairobi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
We wouldn't ask a rose that grew from the concrete for having damaged petals; in turn we'd all celebrate its tenacity, we'd all love tz will to reach the sun well we are the roses n these are my damaged petals don't ask me why thank God and ask me how

Neytiri!! Lol, remember me? Thought of checking out your work and i must say it's great! Rock on :) x
Please check out my poem "Ghosts of the Past" and rate/comment? Would appreciate it!

Neytiri GOLD said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 1:49 pm
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
14 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live as if you'll die today. Dream as if you'll live forever.

Thank you!!! <3

Neytiri GOLD said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 1:48 pm
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
14 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live as if you'll die today. Dream as if you'll live forever.

Thank you honey!!! <3

izyfizy GOLD said...
on Dec. 4 2011 at 4:52 pm
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
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Favorite Quote:
You all laugh because I'm different,
I laugh because you're all the same.
- Anonymous

whoah! i know JUST how you feel! GREAT poem! :D

Lacie101 said...
on Dec. 2 2011 at 11:24 pm

very cool and very relateable. 

 



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