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Dreams Rise,
Like a mountain to the sky,
Dreams Grow,
Like a newly planted tree,
Dreams Crash,
Like waves on a beach,
Dreams Go,
Like a wind whistling though the trees





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brynnibooo said...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 8:23 pm
This is pretty! I love poems that use personification! The imagery is very nice too! You should check out some of my poems! I would really appreciate some feedback! (Great Job on Editor's Choice too :D) -Keep Writing! 
 
Lizette said...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 5:20 pm
i loved the structure, the rythem, and how you kept it short and to the point! great job!
 
Compulsiveshoelace said...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 4:26 pm

This is beautiful, in an abstract way.

 

 
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