Let Us Love

November 30, 2011
By Me22895 DIAMOND, Azle, Texas
Me22895 DIAMOND, Azle, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
If nothing ever changed, there would be no butterflies.


Why do our parents say
It’s so futile and juvenile
For two teenagers to fall in love?
Why can’t we?
So what if we don’t love like adults?
So what if we hold hands
To show our affection?
Who are they to say
That’s not good enough?
And why not enjoy
Whatever it is we have
While we’re young?
While we’re crazy enough
To enjoy the overwhelming lust,
When we can see each other
Every single day,
Without any real life adult problems
To deal with.
Stop telling us how we’re doomed to fail,
And let us enjoy
Whatever you won’t
Admit to be love.


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on Dec. 2 2011 at 10:28 am
LifeIsPoetry PLATINUM, Kapowsin, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Every time you smile at someone, it is an action of love, a gift to that person, a beautiful thing."
– Mother Teresa

I agree with this poem! Adults say we should wait to fall in love, but how can we learn what love is if we don't figure it out as teenagers? I love your point of view and how you present it. Very well written. Maybe you can review some of my poetry?

Matice BRONZE said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 11:08 pm
Matice BRONZE, O&#39Fallon, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Maria, first, let me say that you will most certainly regret it. Second, let me say that I'm in."-Smith

Incredible job. I loved reading that. You're really talented.

Please take a chance to look at some of my work. I'd love to hear some feedback from you. :)


on Dec. 1 2011 at 8:16 pm
ThePeaceDaisy BRONZE, Albany, New York
4 articles 5 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Laundry is the only thing that should be separated by color.” - Unknown
I will change this every week!

It's so true..I once felt like I was in love, but I'm not totally sure. Anyways, I love this poem! It's going on my favorites list :)

on Dec. 1 2011 at 7:58 pm
kwoodman821 BRONZE, Old Fort, North Carolina
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This is incredible! i love it!  =D

 


on Dec. 1 2011 at 6:28 pm
WhiteWings GOLD, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing lasts forever on this Earth. Smile

interesting point...very well said

Kalii BRONZE said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 3:19 pm
Kalii BRONZE, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
" No shoes, no shirt, and I still get service!" -LMFAO

This is super good! & I feel this way sometimes... (:

on Dec. 1 2011 at 11:51 am
Natasha1994 SILVER, Arizona City, Arizona
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i love it you put something that is really true for us young kids alot ppl wouldnt write something about this good job

on Dec. 1 2011 at 10:55 am
Simplemelody GOLD, Otisco, Indiana
17 articles 12 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
May the sun always shine on your windowpane; May a rainbow be certain to follow each rain; May the hand of a friend always be near you; May God fill your heart with gladness to cheer you.

This is very good and describes what happens in many of our lives. The true question is why arent we allowed to love as teenagers. My dad has always told me its because are brains arent developed enough to handle it. But I disagree ive been in love and its the best thing in the world and we handled it just fine until it was over anyway. Great Job!

KShep12 GOLD said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 9:26 am
KShep12 GOLD, Lake Butler, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It isn't where you came from, its where you're going that counts." -Ella Fitzgerald

I really like this poem. I love the concept of falling in love. This just described exactly what was on my mind!

on Dec. 1 2011 at 9:20 am
Rainyday SILVER, Acton, Massachusetts
6 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
As you go on with life, never regret anything. Everything I've ever done has lead me to having for beautiful children. If I had never gotten on my motor cycle that day I would have never met your mother and you wouldn't be here-dad

I think you did an amazing job on this poem i liked it alot and feel like you did a great job capturing emotions and adressing a subject most teens can relate to


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