This Is Just To Say

November 19, 2011
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I have spoken
your secrets
that you entrusted
to me

and which
you probably
did not
want told

Forgive me
they were hard to keep
so intriguing
and so juicy

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Silver2black said...
Jan. 22, 2012 at 11:44 pm
The only thing that got my attention was the title, I have read the actual poem before "This is just to Say"...So far my favorites. Wow, I thought I was the only one who copied the poem and made a whole different story out of it. To me your copy is better than mine, keep writing.
Jappyalldayeveryday said...
Dec. 30, 2011 at 1:45 pm
This is cute, but simple and not filled with emotion
Ethereal This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 30, 2011 at 7:35 am
It doesn't really seem like a poem, more like a split up note or something, which is maybe what you are going for. It doesn't flow that well (but then again, that might be what you were going for) but I can see your meaning clearly- it's honest, like a lot of your poems are. not some vague idea- this is concrete and hard- I read this once and got the full idea, though I keep reading it just because.
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