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my love
i can not help feeling

the way i do
impossible to stop
you mean so much to me
yet you don't know it
to have you sit there
not knowing, kills me
silently, i hope
you notice , that you feel
the same way about me
for there is no going back
only forward
i declare my love
i scream it to the sky
i whisper it to the earth
i sing it through out the land
so I'll tell you again
i declare my love to you





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sunshine7223 said...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 5:14 pm
This is really good Goddess. It's SO full of emotion, and like I told you, that's what I love most about poetry. GREAT job!! :)
 
Goddess said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 2:39 pm
SO people know it the beging starts wiht my love.
 
Goddess replied...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 2:40 pm

*beginning

 

 
LoudDreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 3:55 pm
Woah, this is good, very moving and heartfelt. I think my favorite lines were: "I scream it to the sky,/I whisper it through the earth," (sorry about the added punctuations and caps, I know it's not your style, but I do it automatically.) I like this alot, I think I'll give you four stars! Great work! (For the record, if anyone else had such bad punctuation, i would have given them a two, but like I said I know that isn't your style.)
 
Goddess replied...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 1:33 pm
thank you it means alot to me.
 
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