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The Achievement of Peace and Flow.

A sense of order
Not in the surroundings,
But in the self.

Mental entropy,
The inner turmoil,
Is the enemy of serenity.

To have direction
Is to have peace,
But it cannot be forced upon the individual,
Only created within.

Grasp the helm of the ship called Flow.





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CorrinaElisabeth said...
Dec. 19, 2011 at 7:29 pm
I like this piece. It has a rhythm that's almost...well, palpable.
 
applesauceHater said...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 10:20 pm
oooooh! i gotta give you a clap for vocabulary(mine aint that high, but its kay, i understood, i just wont be able to write something like this). loved the last sentence! i love sayings when they dont exactly mean what they're typed out as!anywhoo. i really liked it!it was good!
 
FrAme replied...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 10:23 pm
Thanks. By the way, I cheated on the vocab with a thesaurus. :)
 
applesauceHater replied...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 10:27 pm
ah thesaurus:)where would we be without it today:)is kay. i dont count it cheating. ur poem is still 100 percent fantastic
 
applesauceHater replied...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 10:29 pm
ah thesaurus:)where would we be without it today:)is kay. i dont count it as cheating. ur poem is still 100 percent fantastic
 
applesauceHater replied...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 10:30 pm
ah srry for the double comments:)i thought it didnt post it:)but now i meant it twice as more:)
 
tay.la said...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 6:31 pm
anything with reference to boats gets my knees a shakin'
 
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