the first kiss

November 28, 2011
Custom User Avatar
More by this author
today couldn't be any better
the wind blew just right
the temperature was perfect
and i was with him

his arms around me
my head on his shoulder
our hands intertwined
everything was in the right place

then he moved closer
and i moved closer
he leaned
i leaned

then it happened
his lips felt perfect on mine
soft, smooth, perfect
he was intoxicating

then he pulled away
no this moment couldn't end
but perfect never lasts
it had to end sometime

then time sped up
we got home faster
he left sooner
the moment was gone

he was all i could think
all i could breathe
my life was his now
but so was his mine

we were one now inseparable
was this love i don't know
but you never know the first time
i just prayed it wouldn't be the last

Join the Discussion

This article has 6 comments. Post your own now!

MissKrissyKat said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 11:51 pm
This is really good! I loved it!
DarkLonely said...
Jan. 22, 2012 at 1:05 am
Awesome!!!! its... amazing
Think4Ever said...
Dec. 30, 2011 at 3:54 pm
Vivid and entertaining. Very good.
Muzee3 said...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 12:57 am
Its enticing!!!! I felt it.... Keep up ur writing.. :)
FlaviusJacobiusOssummuss said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 4:47 pm


That was good.  The way you wrote it made my heart rate increase, just like it was actually happening.  In other words, (clears throat) "Well done, good and faithful poet!"

xo19brandee93xo said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 3:34 pm
Really good. I've had the same experience somewhat with a guy i really liked. Keep it up.
Site Feedback