the first kiss

November 28, 2011
By TheNerdGirl PLATINUM, Glen Ellyn, Illinois
TheNerdGirl PLATINUM, Glen Ellyn, Illinois
26 articles 28 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon because even if you miss you'll still end up among the star's


today couldn't be any better
the wind blew just right
the temperature was perfect
and i was with him

his arms around me
my head on his shoulder
our hands intertwined
everything was in the right place

then he moved closer
and i moved closer
he leaned
i leaned

then it happened
his lips felt perfect on mine
soft, smooth, perfect
he was intoxicating

then he pulled away
no this moment couldn't end
but perfect never lasts
it had to end sometime

then time sped up
we got home faster
he left sooner
the moment was gone

he was all i could think
all i could breathe
my life was his now
but so was his mine

we were one now inseparable
was this love i don't know
but you never know the first time
i just prayed it wouldn't be the last


The author's comments:
this story is all about the most memroball first kiss that happens to everyone and is different for every one. it is sometimes the start of love but usaually you just think it is

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on Apr. 6 2012 at 11:51 pm
MissKrissyKat BRONZE, Peebles, Ohio
2 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't need no one's help cause i can bless myself, no one else can help, but me, myself, and I!

This is really good! I loved it!

Zayyy BRONZE said...
on Jan. 22 2012 at 1:05 am
Zayyy BRONZE, Baltimore, Maryland
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Awesome!!!! its... amazing

Think4Ever said...
on Dec. 30 2011 at 3:54 pm
Think4Ever, Oxford, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"We loved with a love that was more than love."

Vivid and entertaining. Very good.

on Dec. 26 2011 at 12:57 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

Its enticing!!!! I felt it.... Keep up ur writing.. :)

on Dec. 1 2011 at 4:47 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

Wow...

That was good.  The way you wrote it made my heart rate increase, just like it was actually happening.  In other words, (clears throat) "Well done, good and faithful poet!"


on Dec. 1 2011 at 3:34 pm
xo19brandee93xo SILVER, Griswold, Connecticut
6 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Look, if you had one shot, or one opportunity
To seize everything you ever wanted-One moment
Would you capture it or just let it slip?"

Really good. I've had the same experience somewhat with a guy i really liked. Keep it up.




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