Daddy

November 28, 2011
By GracieRaine GOLD, Clarkston, Michigan
GracieRaine GOLD, Clarkston, Michigan
10 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When we allow ourselves to become vulnerable, to take chances, and to risk our pride, that is when we find our own glory."
-Richard Corman


Daddy do you even love me?
Well i wish you'd show it
cause' i wouldn't know it.
What kind of dad makes his daughter cry?
Doesn't look her in the eye.
Daddy there were tears there,
if you saw them would you even care?
Daddy i thought you were on my side
but all you did was made me cry
Daddy i thought you'd believe me
but why couldn't i see?
Daddy you made me sad
and now all i feel is bad.
We should have left you
why didn't we?
Now I'm feeling beat.
But now we're gone,
we'll be gone for so long.
Do i must say.
Daddy don't leave me.



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on Dec. 5 2011 at 12:51 pm
GracieRaine GOLD, Clarkston, Michigan
10 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When we allow ourselves to become vulnerable, to take chances, and to risk our pride, that is when we find our own glory."
-Richard Corman

Its not that i don't love my dad. i do. he just never shows me that he loves me too. he has only said i love you like twice that i remember

on Dec. 2 2011 at 12:42 pm
katieyoung18 PLATINUM, Scottsboro, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
dont let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.

this reminds me the same way i feel about my dad

on Dec. 2 2011 at 12:19 pm
GracieRaine GOLD, Clarkston, Michigan
10 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When we allow ourselves to become vulnerable, to take chances, and to risk our pride, that is when we find our own glory."
-Richard Corman

Sorry about the second to last sentence. its supposed to be "so" not "do"

 





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