Look inside someone

November 29, 2011
By Kimberly_W PLATINUM, Lafferty, Ohio
Kimberly_W PLATINUM, Lafferty, Ohio
26 articles 3 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
live today as if it was your last with every possible moment, and
live it up, drink it down, party hard


whats it like?
Life and Death?
Love and Hate?
Do you really know?
Is what you think, Whats real?
Are we just programed to believed this?
Whats it like?
to be normal?
never sick, never hurt, never to care...
Whats it like to never care?
Do you have a careful heart?
Have you experienced love?
Whats it like?
Anything like mine?
Do you plan on having kids?
What do you want them to look like?
Could you answer this?
What if i was a stranger...
Would you still answer?

every day somebody gets killed,
every day someone is born,
what would it be like if we all got along?
the world is blue, gray, green, ect.
People are black, white, thin, and fat
Can't we pretend not to notice?
It is really that hard?
Just look as if you were blind?
Don't see anyone
Then you can like someone for there personality
not beauty, or hair, or body
less fights
less deaths
less harrassments
4 out of 5 kids are bullied
wanna know why?
Because people judge by the outside,
save lives, act blind, look inside someone.
people are like books....
Don't know them til they open up
And like everybook
There all different



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on Nov. 30 2011 at 8:03 pm
poet.lover PLATINUM, Pineville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Never part without loving words to think of during your absence. It may be that you will not meet again in this life."

this is so true! i truly love the last 5 lines!! great work(:

Jane3 SILVER said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 8:01 pm
Jane3 SILVER, Bryn Mawr, Pennsylvania
8 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The capital-T truth is about life BEFORE death. It is about the real value of a real education, which has almost nothing to do with knowledge, and everything to do with simple awareness; awareness of what is so real and essential, so hidden in plain sight all around us, all the time, that we have to keep reminding ourselves over and over: this is water. This is water.”

Yeah I liked the comparison to a book!

Jane3 SILVER said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 8:00 pm
Jane3 SILVER, Bryn Mawr, Pennsylvania
8 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The capital-T truth is about life BEFORE death. It is about the real value of a real education, which has almost nothing to do with knowledge, and everything to do with simple awareness; awareness of what is so real and essential, so hidden in plain sight all around us, all the time, that we have to keep reminding ourselves over and over: this is water. This is water.”

Yeah I like the book reference!

Jane3 SILVER said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 7:59 pm
Jane3 SILVER, Bryn Mawr, Pennsylvania
8 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The capital-T truth is about life BEFORE death. It is about the real value of a real education, which has almost nothing to do with knowledge, and everything to do with simple awareness; awareness of what is so real and essential, so hidden in plain sight all around us, all the time, that we have to keep reminding ourselves over and over: this is water. This is water.”

Really love this!!! It's something so true and worth writing about! Well done! FYI I think in the last sentence you meant to use "they're" instead of "there." Feel free to check out some of my stuff!

on Nov. 30 2011 at 6:36 pm
Fran333 PLATINUM, Santa Ana, Other
26 articles 17 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you're unwilling to be aware of the darkness, you cannot see the light."

i like the end best, i totally agree 

AvaJay GOLD said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 6:32 pm
AvaJay GOLD, Spokane, Washington
13 articles 4 photos 184 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me not pray to be sheltered from dangers, but to be fearless in facing them. Let me not pray for the stilling of my pain, but for the heart to conquer it.
~ Tagore

Well written! Good emphasis on your point!




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