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Departure

A bee escapes its hive
a bird flies from its flock
a wolf wonders from its pack
a fish swims from its school
a puppy abandons its litter
I leave the throng to which I belong
the question is










how to start?





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Muzee3 said...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 7:56 am
Simple and nice, but i dont say its ur best....... keep writing!!
 
Choosing2Live4Christ said...
Jan. 13, 2012 at 8:28 pm
i realize that you have a tendency to do the last line a few lines down. I guess that's just your style :)
 
Annette11 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 4:44 pm
Thanks so much (:
 
Annette11 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 1:52 pm
Very short but good! A more developed piece would probably attract more attention, but you seem like a very talented author!
 
Ella1 replied...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 4:36 pm
Thank you, I read one of your poems too. It was amazing!
 
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