Alone

November 24, 2011
By Inksy SILVER, NSL, Utah
Inksy SILVER, NSL, Utah
7 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Three can keep a secret if two of them are dead"
~Benjamin Frankiln
"Love? Above all things I believe in love. Love is like oxygen. Love is a many splendored thing. Love lifts us up where we belong. All you need is love."
~Moulin Rouge


Guilt crushing me
Down through the floors
Confusion about you
Confusion about him
Even more rejected
Then I was before there were us
And that is how I feel
I won’t let you close enough to hurt me
It’s happened too many heart-wrenching times before
I’m older now
I’m wiser now
I’m not a little girl anymore
Please understand, I never meant to hurt you
And I think that years from now
I’ll find that I still miss you
You deserve to be happy, you’ll find that lucky girl
And I’ve accepted the fact
That I’ll always be alone



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butterfly123 said...
on May. 21 2012 at 3:00 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
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hey! very well written. the last two lines really caught my attention and you did a good job in capturing the emotion within. great work and keep writing :D !

on Feb. 9 2012 at 11:42 pm
Kiki_McGee GOLD, Woodstock, Illinois
16 articles 16 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope is the thing with feathers that perches in the soul - and sings the tunes without the words - and never stops at all." - Emily Dickinson

I agree, the last two lines are so haunting (and exactly how I often feel). I would love to read some of your work. Will you perhaps read through some of my writing?

Inksy SILVER said...
on Feb. 5 2012 at 4:46 pm
Inksy SILVER, NSL, Utah
7 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Three can keep a secret if two of them are dead"
~Benjamin Frankiln
"Love? Above all things I believe in love. Love is like oxygen. Love is a many splendored thing. Love lifts us up where we belong. All you need is love."
~Moulin Rouge

Thank you (:

on Feb. 1 2012 at 12:18 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

I love the last two lines:) Could you please check out my work? I would appreciate any advice:)

on Jan. 28 2012 at 9:31 am
LittleUggie BRONZE, Cookeville, Tennessee
4 articles 3 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you can't be a good example, you'll just have to be a horrible warning. -Jennifer Crusie

Wow, those last two lines are so charged with emotion, it feels like a body blow. Good writing!

O.G.B said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 1:23 pm
O.G.B, Phoenix, Arizona
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Wonderful Poem. In a way , I know it , in a way I do not. 5/5

on Dec. 6 2011 at 11:40 pm
YukiBella SILVER, Tampa, Florida
9 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"I can see the sky while staring at the ground. \"-Corey Wittborn

I can totally relate to this. You'll always have that one person in your life that you will always love. Your poem is very well written. It flows from one line to the next very very nicely. Your poem is so full of life. It was very enjoyable to read.

on Dec. 5 2011 at 6:36 am
KenzieHockey123 BRONZE, Cedaar Rapids, Iowa
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's not who you are that holds you back, it's who you think you're not."

Beautifully written, it really flows and you can almost feel what you're describing :)

Inksy SILVER said...
on Dec. 4 2011 at 10:05 pm
Inksy SILVER, NSL, Utah
7 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Three can keep a secret if two of them are dead"
~Benjamin Frankiln
"Love? Above all things I believe in love. Love is like oxygen. Love is a many splendored thing. Love lifts us up where we belong. All you need is love."
~Moulin Rouge

Wow, thank you (:

on Dec. 4 2011 at 3:50 pm
LifesIllusion BRONZE, Cicero, Indiana
4 articles 0 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't let your fears slow you down. Instead, chase them down and beat them."

I love this so much! The flow of the words in on word is beautiful. You have such a talent of making your writing sound effortless. :)

Inksy SILVER said...
on Dec. 4 2011 at 2:43 am
Inksy SILVER, NSL, Utah
7 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Three can keep a secret if two of them are dead"
~Benjamin Frankiln
"Love? Above all things I believe in love. Love is like oxygen. Love is a many splendored thing. Love lifts us up where we belong. All you need is love."
~Moulin Rouge

Thank you!! That means so much (:

on Dec. 3 2011 at 1:05 pm
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
23 articles 3 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
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Beautiful!!!! Meaningful feelings radiating from this poem!!!! This poem is just amazing. It captured me in it's perfectly flowing text! Wow!


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