A Suicide Story

November 24, 2011
By swiftheart GOLD, Houston, Texas
swiftheart GOLD, Houston, Texas
17 articles 5 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If someone were to pay you 10 cents for every kind word you ever spoke and collect 5 cents for every unkind word, would you be rich or poor?"


Hi, my name is Richard,
I am four years old.
I live here with my Mommy and Daddy
Its very lonely.

Will you be my friend?
Will you play with me?
Or will you point and laugh at me like everyone else.

No, your nice.
Not like my Mommy or Daddy.
See this? Its a gash,
I got it when Daddy hit me.
He hit me with his bottle.

Shh, I hear something,
Oh no its him
His back
Quick hide!

Do you hear that, he called my name.
He sounds angrier than usual,
I better go before he comes up,
Who knows... maybe he will only yell if I hurry.

Do you feel that?
Its very strange.
Do you see that?
Its scary.

I'm scared!
No! Daddy NO!
I promise I’ll be good,
I promise I’ll never speak again,
Please, please, PLEASE!

Its too late,
Its over.
Wait! What is this?
What is this feeling?
Pain?
No it can't be, it is harsh.
Terror?
No, I'm not scared.
Its gentle kind and suiting.

Who are you?
Where am I?
What is this?
Everything is clean, everything is nice, everything is love
This must be heaven
Its just like the pictures in my books.



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on Jan. 15 2012 at 6:29 pm
swiftheart GOLD, Houston, Texas
17 articles 5 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If someone were to pay you 10 cents for every kind word you ever spoke and collect 5 cents for every unkind word, would you be rich or poor?"

LOl, thank you soo much.

on Jan. 15 2012 at 6:04 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
20 articles 3 photos 388 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

I'm speechless. 5/5

poeta said...
on Jan. 7 2012 at 5:40 am
This is simply amazing, One of the best poems I have seen so far. The poem just flowed perfectly and wow. The emotion was properly conveyed. I just wish you could have modified the last verse abit to make it flow better. and the titles was a bit off, compared to the story itself. other than that, it was a magnificent poem.

on Jan. 7 2012 at 5:37 am
swiftheart GOLD, Houston, Texas
17 articles 5 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If someone were to pay you 10 cents for every kind word you ever spoke and collect 5 cents for every unkind word, would you be rich or poor?"

thank YOU so much.

on Jan. 6 2012 at 6:27 am
swiftheart GOLD, Houston, Texas
17 articles 5 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If someone were to pay you 10 cents for every kind word you ever spoke and collect 5 cents for every unkind word, would you be rich or poor?"

Thanks cook, I appreciate the complement.

on Jan. 6 2012 at 6:26 am
swiftheart GOLD, Houston, Texas
17 articles 5 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If someone were to pay you 10 cents for every kind word you ever spoke and collect 5 cents for every unkind word, would you be rich or poor?"

Thank you very much

cookiestar said...
on Jan. 5 2012 at 6:06 am
Wow, I love the way its'written:). it's a great poem. It's emotional and beautiful.

on Jan. 5 2012 at 6:05 am
TawnyNerd1995 SILVER, Unit 15584, Other
6 articles 1 photo 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Words are just emotion, cut into little pieces." -ECW

ohmy goodness. this gave me chills! excellent job :)

on Jan. 5 2012 at 6:04 am
swiftheart GOLD, Houston, Texas
17 articles 5 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If someone were to pay you 10 cents for every kind word you ever spoke and collect 5 cents for every unkind word, would you be rich or poor?"

Thank you very much. I really like urs too

on Jan. 4 2012 at 9:56 pm
InvisibleHeart GOLD, Barony, Other
15 articles 4 photos 36 comments
Very nice. :)

on Jan. 3 2012 at 12:20 pm
swiftheart GOLD, Houston, Texas
17 articles 5 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If someone were to pay you 10 cents for every kind word you ever spoke and collect 5 cents for every unkind word, would you be rich or poor?"

thank you very much for taking your time to read this poem :D

on Jan. 2 2012 at 11:40 am
shortyL98 BRONZE, Keokuk, Iowa
1 article 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
live life as if u are going to die today

nicely done! XD

on Jan. 2 2012 at 11:05 am
swiftheart GOLD, Houston, Texas
17 articles 5 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If someone were to pay you 10 cents for every kind word you ever spoke and collect 5 cents for every unkind word, would you be rich or poor?"

Thank you sara

on Jan. 2 2012 at 10:57 am
IdentityMangler PLATINUM, Baton Rouge, Louisiana
34 articles 3 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be kind. You never know whose fighting for their life.

Nice job, Swift! Gave me serious chill, mann

on Jan. 2 2012 at 10:33 am
swiftheart GOLD, Houston, Texas
17 articles 5 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If someone were to pay you 10 cents for every kind word you ever spoke and collect 5 cents for every unkind word, would you be rich or poor?"

thanks....

on Jan. 2 2012 at 10:32 am
swiftheart GOLD, Houston, Texas
17 articles 5 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If someone were to pay you 10 cents for every kind word you ever spoke and collect 5 cents for every unkind word, would you be rich or poor?"

Thanks, I appreciate it.

on Jan. 2 2012 at 10:32 am
U2_Fanatic GOLD, Westbury, Other
19 articles 0 photos 18 comments
WOW. [b] NICE [/b] Swift!

Rain. SILVER said...
on Jan. 2 2012 at 10:31 am
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
7 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

This gave me chills :o keep writing!

butterfly123 said...
on Dec. 30 2011 at 1:18 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
0 articles 0 photos 408 comments
scary.......but very well written. keep it up!

on Dec. 30 2011 at 1:16 am
Margaret252 SILVER, Thrichur, Other
6 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
why are you trying to fit in when you were made to stand out???

diz z jst so touchin...


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