November 24, 2011
Just one, you promised yourself.
Only once will i use this drug.
Oh but it gets you so far, just once more i swear I'm not addicted. Oh being up is so so nice! Once more and i admit, I'm hooked. Feeling the pain i find a blade. Scared but anxious to find what it does. Feeling the blood trickle down your arm. Releasing the demons damaged harm. You now find yourself addicted to releasing the pain in your life. Why must the world be so cruel! Mean glares! Stares! People don't understand, they never will. On how it feels to finally find something in your life that helps. Even if you do get addicted. . . . .

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thomakab14 said...
Nov. 27, 2013 at 3:33 pm
Awkward transition between drugs and cutting... I don't understand it? Is the drug actually the blade?
HarryPotterLover30 said...
Sept. 22, 2012 at 6:54 pm
Wow..... awesome, slightly creepy- but in a good way, and vewry true. Love it! :) FIX your punctuation and you will be Golden  
Studio_Riet said...
Jan. 18, 2012 at 6:40 pm
The rhythm and stanzas were kind of hard to follow, but the overall message of it was astounding.
Hoosier said...
Dec. 20, 2011 at 10:33 pm
really good poem...and by the way get on here more so i got somebody like me to talk to haha cause some of the kids are.....well ya know
CountryCutie replied...
Jan. 18, 2012 at 10:31 pm
Hey thanks:) btw im on here all the time there darlin
Zahria said...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 12:11 pm
this is really good... great job!!
CountryCutie replied...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 12:17 pm
thanks much:)
raindance72 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 6, 2011 at 6:52 pm

I love this poem! It's meaningful strong and poignant well done :)


IamtheshyStargirl said...
Dec. 6, 2011 at 6:43 pm

This has a lot of potential, though I feel it needs a little work, I'd suggest restructuring it a bit, you started out with the subject as 'I', but changed it to 'you' towards the end.

Thanks for sharing! :)

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