Addicted

November 24, 2011
By MiKaylaMarie BRONZE, Billings, Montana
MiKaylaMarie BRONZE, Billings, Montana
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Just one, you promised yourself.
Only once will i use this drug.
Oh but it gets you so far, just once more i swear I'm not addicted. Oh being up is so so nice! Once more and i admit, I'm hooked. Feeling the pain i find a blade. Scared but anxious to find what it does. Feeling the blood trickle down your arm. Releasing the demons damaged harm. You now find yourself addicted to releasing the pain in your life. Why must the world be so cruel! Mean glares! Stares! People don't understand, they never will. On how it feels to finally find something in your life that helps. Even if you do get addicted. . . . .



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on Nov. 27 2013 at 3:33 pm
thomakab14 SILVER, North Canton, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Whether you say you can or day you can't, you're right!

Awkward transition between drugs and cutting... I don't understand it? Is the drug actually the blade?

on Sep. 22 2012 at 6:54 pm
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD, Rancho Cordova, California
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Favorite Quote:
“We are all a little weird and life is a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.” - Doctor Seuss

Wow..... awesome, slightly creepy- but in a good way, and vewry true. Love it! :) FIX your punctuation and you will be Golden  

on Jan. 18 2012 at 10:31 pm
MiKaylaMarie BRONZE, Billings, Montana
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Hey thanks:) btw im on here all the time there darlin

on Jan. 18 2012 at 6:40 pm
Studio_Riet GOLD, Tonasket, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
" Times you see, is a little arrangement that man has made for himself to try to measure the immeasurable mysteries of life." -Calypso to Ulysses (Bernard Evslin.)
"You don't have a soul, you are a soul. You have a body" - CS Lewis

The rhythm and stanzas were kind of hard to follow, but the overall message of it was astounding.

Hoosier BRONZE said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 10:33 pm
Hoosier BRONZE, Connersville, Indiana
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really good poem...and by the way get on here more so i got somebody like me to talk to haha cause some of the kids are.....well ya know

on Dec. 18 2011 at 12:17 pm
MiKaylaMarie BRONZE, Billings, Montana
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thanks much:)

Zahria SILVER said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 12:11 pm
Zahria SILVER, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"its better to have lost and loved than to never have loved at all"

this is really good... great job!!

byebye said...
on Dec. 6 2011 at 6:52 pm
byebye, Nevermore, Other
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I love this poem! It's meaningful strong and poignant well done :)

 


on Dec. 6 2011 at 6:43 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

This has a lot of potential, though I feel it needs a little work, I'd suggest restructuring it a bit, you started out with the subject as 'I', but changed it to 'you' towards the end.

Thanks for sharing! :)



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