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The Sadness of the Mist

November 24, 2011
By yuifrankie BRONZE, Montalban Rizal, Other
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I sat beside the wall
Crying as the rain began to fall
The wound in my heart starts to bleed
And a voice inside my mind began to plead.

The hurt I felt inside my heart
Like a piece of paper ripped apart
The words you said always makes me drown
And because of you, my life turned upside down.

A deafening silence surrounded me
Thinking that you said, "You love me".
I stood up and clenched my fist,
I'll move on and ran away through the sadness of the mist.

© Omar M., Phildelphia, PA

The author's comments:
This poem is about a girl who was cheated by a guy she loved. She cried and cried for days but later on, she realized that crying for that guys is a waste of time.
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