my love ...is it what it seem

November 24, 2011
By TOPNOTCH..barbie BRONZE, Kapolei, Hawaii
TOPNOTCH..barbie BRONZE, Kapolei, Hawaii
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i got the vooo doo for you..~! JUST BECAUSE IT LOOK GOOD DOESNT MEAN ITS GOOD FOR YOU..


is it what it seems ..
is it like in movies and magazines
is it sweet or does it hurts ..
well my love ..
it felt like a mistake
it wasn't so great .
i felt so cheated and used mostly verbally abused..
my love i know it was wrong ..
but through it all i was strong ..
i don't call it love i call it a game maybe even pain..
my love it lost .. its gone .. its threw..
i haven't loved in a while so I'm curious to know..
is it what its seems ..
is it like movies or magazines..
is it sweet or is it pain..
if i give it another try what will i gain ..
so what is love ..
is it what it seems..
next time i love again i hope its like fantasies and dreams...


The author's comments:
this just came to mind listening to a song. also all the words came from the top of my head.

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on Nov. 30 2011 at 5:48 pm
i think this is a really good poem .. you should post more !




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