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No one out there
No one to hurt, or heal
No one to catch me when I fall
No one to hear my screams or calls
No one to truly listen
No one out there





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AlaskanGirl said...
May 10, 2012 at 12:45 am
No I am not crying... This is amazing
 
OfMuchHappiness This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 29, 2012 at 12:58 pm
This is a good one. It would be even better if the phrase "to hurt" wouldn't be there, because no one wants to be hurt...do you get it? Anyway, I really do like it, good job!
 
kaitlin96 said...
Jan. 23, 2012 at 10:27 pm
Awesome poem
 
Cams05 said...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 2:49 pm
no one out there...I like the feeling..nice poem 
 
ags_586 replied...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 3:40 pm
i wrote that poem for some one.... it was my way to try to make a difference in a life, but in the end, the poem ended up describing how i also felt.
 
Yuki-Cross replied...
Jun. 17, 2012 at 1:12 am
I like it. i feel that way . but i have u alex.
 
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