Maybe, maybe not.

November 27, 2011
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Do I like you?
I thought we were just friends,
Maybe more.
I like you,
I don’t like you.
So you do like me?
If we are just friends than why do I love you?
Friends don’t feel this way about other friends.
One more try, that’s all.
Why do we keep this up?
People change and time keeps ticking.
I love you,
I always will, no matter what happens.
Wherever I am in my life I will still love you.
I will love you until I take my last breath of air.
And with my very last breath of air,
I will breathe the words I love you.

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MyConstRuctd_IdentiTy said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 5:04 pm
Have only ever really felt this way about a few select people in or previously in my life. Like the other commentors, I liked the use of questions. The whole beginning just kind of created this sense of uncertainty, and I like how it smoothed out a little bit towards the end. Nice job. :)
jcrisp said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 3:43 pm
my favourite thing is also the use of questions, keeps it very fast and confusing :D
Karlynne This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 3:39 pm
wow...that was really good. extremely deep. i loved it! 5 stars!
AnimaCordis said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 3:39 pm

 i like your creation of voice in this, and your use of questions

nice job!

samwich7 said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 3:39 pm
Awesome. I can so relate :)
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