Someone There

November 26, 2011
By KarinaDavidyuk GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
KarinaDavidyuk GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
15 articles 1 photo 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a game of chess.. Every move makes a change.


Someone is always there to hold you
To pick you up when you are down
To put a smile on your face
To turn that frown upside down

If you keep looking
No one will compare
To the person you loved dearly
Even though they’re still not there

If you let yourself let go
If you keep yourself controlled
You will find the one you need
Both of you will make good deeds



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on Jan. 7 2012 at 7:55 pm
KarinaDavidyuk GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
15 articles 1 photo 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a game of chess.. Every move makes a change.

Omg! You're too nice thank you :)

on Jan. 7 2012 at 5:25 pm
Zinaidia SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
8 articles 3 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"Whatever you are, be a good one.\\\"

Very uplifting and hopeful. You have a strong voice Karina, keep writing!

on Nov. 29 2011 at 6:50 pm
KarinaDavidyuk GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
15 articles 1 photo 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a game of chess.. Every move makes a change.

I just realized that but thank you for you critiquing my work! 

on Nov. 29 2011 at 6:41 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1648 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

Beautiful poem!  I really like how it flows and my only criticism is that the two 'down's in one stanza are kind of repetitive.  But that's only minor.  Keep writing! :)

on Nov. 28 2011 at 5:51 pm
KarinaDavidyuk GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
15 articles 1 photo 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a game of chess.. Every move makes a change.

Thanks musicluver :)

on Nov. 28 2011 at 5:34 pm
musicluver SILVER, Indio, California
9 articles 2 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
don't let people bring you down.

Not so bad girl.


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