Rainy Days

November 26, 2011
By KarinaDavidyuk GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
KarinaDavidyuk GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
15 articles 1 photo 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a game of chess.. Every move makes a change.


Rainy days
A raindrop glides down the window
Resembling my tears
The fog hides everything evil within
Nothing can be seen

The street lights struggle to light the path
And the fog resists giving up
I sit and watch them battle
Who will win?

I picture myself,
The path and the struggle
Which way leads to my future?
Should I find it?
Or should I be found?



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on Jan. 7 2012 at 7:54 pm
KarinaDavidyuk GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
15 articles 1 photo 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a game of chess.. Every move makes a change.

Thank you for your thoughts :)

on Jan. 7 2012 at 5:24 pm
Zinaidia SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
8 articles 3 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"Whatever you are, be a good one.\\\"

Wow, very interesting. I loved the imagery! Great job, keep on writing.

pitt98 GOLD said...
on Dec. 4 2011 at 3:21 pm
pitt98 GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
10 articles 3 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's not the days in life we remember, rather the moments." 
- Walt Disney

try getting rid of the cliches

on Dec. 4 2011 at 1:15 pm
KarinaDavidyuk GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
15 articles 1 photo 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a game of chess.. Every move makes a change.

Thank you :) 

on Nov. 29 2011 at 6:55 pm
CreatingMadness BRONZE, Lake Tapps, Washington
4 articles 0 photos 8 comments
this is a really good poem i can relate pretty easy and i think is just all around good lol

on Nov. 29 2011 at 6:48 pm
KarinaDavidyuk GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
15 articles 1 photo 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a game of chess.. Every move makes a change.

Thankk yoou soo much 

on Nov. 29 2011 at 6:43 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1648 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

Wow!  This is by far your best poem yet.  Excellent punctuation and rhythm and the ending line is spectacular.  "Or should it be found?"  That sent shivers down my spine!  In a good way, of course. :)


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