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Rainy Days

Rainy days
A raindrop glides down the window
Resembling my tears
The fog hides everything evil within
Nothing can be seen

The street lights struggle to light the path
And the fog resists giving up
I sit and watch them battle
Who will win?

I picture myself,
The path and the struggle
Which way leads to my future?
Should I find it?
Or should I be found?





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Zinaidia said...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 5:24 pm
Wow, very interesting. I loved the imagery! Great job, keep on writing.
 
KarinaDavidyuk replied...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 7:54 pm
Thank you for your thoughts :)
 
pitt98 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 3:21 pm
try getting rid of the cliches
 
careless-whisper said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 6:55 pm
this is a really good poem i can relate pretty easy and i think is just all around good lol
 
KarinaDavidyuk replied...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 1:15 pm
Thank you :) 
 
CarrieAnn13 said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 6:43 pm
Wow!  This is by far your best poem yet.  Excellent punctuation and rhythm and the ending line is spectacular.  "Or should it be found?"  That sent shivers down my spine!  In a good way, of course. :)
 
KarinaDavidyuk replied...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 6:48 pm
Thankk yoou soo much 
 
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