The World's Life

November 16, 2011
A world of desolation.
A life of no content.
A claimed free country.
A state of deprivation.
A lifeless town.
No ones getting easy street.

Second house from the corner is where you'll find her.
Up the stairs and to the left is her door.
Now you see her, but soon you won't.
She pushes past you.
Runs down the stairs.
Sprints for the door, shes out of the house.
Feet bare, pockets full, down the street she goes.
The wind is quiet and soothing.
Her feet are warm against the pavement.
She runs and runs,
leaving her life behind,
only
to begin again.





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DemonnPrincess said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 7:37 pm
I love this poem a lot. It makes me feel like I am really there, looking through your eyes.
 
Littlejalisa replied...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 2:59 pm
haha thanx!!!i e-mail?
 
DemonnPrincess replied...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 12:32 am
You're welcome! ^_^ This is a VERY big accomplishment! No matter what anyone tries to say about you, you should hold onto this and be very proud of it. It is proof that you can do things. ^_^
 
Littlejalisa replied...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 9:49 am
*-*Yay!!! Thanx soo much*-*
 
DemonnPrincess replied...
Dec. 3, 2011 at 8:02 pm
You're welcome! ^_^
 
midnitewanderer said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 11:18 pm

I honestly, truly am in love with this poem! The beginning is strong and dramatic, which really sets the stage. I like how even though it's a poem you made a location, because for this poem I feel likes it really meaningful, it's kind of personalizing the poem but still in a way it's vagueness lets it be about anyone, as if inviting the writer to set off on a journey to take ahold of our destiny! Great deep poem! 

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DemonnPrincess replied...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 7:09 pm
I love this poem a lot. It makes me feel like I am really there, looking through your eyes.
 
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