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The Guider

November 16, 2011
By DANiiELLE BRONZE, New Lebanon, Ohio
DANiiELLE BRONZE, New Lebanon, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"You only lie , if you live a lie. "


God sent me
this angel.
From the
sky above.

To protect me
from the danger
this world has become.
To guide me
through the pain and misery.

To show me
the way things
should be.
To keep me company
when I'm feeling lonely.

Gives me wisdom
and the strength.
To fight everyday.

No matter where
you come from
God sends you
the miracle of love.


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on Nov. 28 2011 at 11:21 pm
midnitewanderer GOLD, West Des Moines, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
Don't let what you can't do stop you from doing what you can do.
John Wooden
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
Eleanor Roosevelt

I could really connect with this poem, it was beautifully written, and the flow was just amazing. Personally I feel like the the third stanza should begin with (to) Give me....etc because the two before are, while the first and last are discontinued, because they're the "beginning" and "end." Overall, great!

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