Lala Dance

November 18, 2011
By Farihafarhana SILVER, Dhaka, Other
Farihafarhana SILVER, Dhaka, Other
9 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
I believe in experience before decesion.

WRITTEN BY ME :D


Lets do the lala dance
A funky dance that will put everyone in a trance
It has awsome swiggly flips
It breaks an old man's HIPS!

You gotta learn it to do it
And move it to show it
And blow it to nail it
And dance till you go on a fit!

You gotta know 90 flips
You gotta swirl your hips
You gotta go CRAZY!
But make sure not to make it clumsy

So come on lets do the lala dance
A funky dance that will put you in a trance
This dance will teach you alot of hops
This dance is a big flop.


The author's comments:
LALA DANCING BABAY 8|

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FULLSTOP GOLD said...
on Mar. 29 2012 at 8:30 am
FULLSTOP GOLD, Skipton, North Yorkshire, Other
13 articles 7 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
forever and ever and ever and ever will never be enough

good afternoon. this is charlotte lancaster, your fellow commentor. today on 'I'm a writer get me out of here' it's Renegade9891 (the author of several successful books including Pirates kiss and making you mine) versus Farihafarhana (other of several less known pieces). Today, there is an ongoing debate between the two, regarding Farihafarhana's poem, The Lala dance. Renegade9891 posted a fair comment on this poem, then Farihafarhana replied using words she did not mean, before being bossed YET AGAIN by renegade9891. yes, me thinks Renegade9891 has WON. thankyou for coming, next week the final takes place between Renegade9891 and FULLSTOP. see you soon!

on Mar. 29 2012 at 4:28 am
Renegade9891 BRONZE, Skipton, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Keep calm and use your powers of reason."
"Get bored and shoot the wall."
"Ideas are like buses, they never come when you need them to."

Plus - inspiration isn't philosophy , you obviously don't even know exactly what it is if you call this philosophy and by the way. Inspiration is writing. And is poetry. Have a nice day!

FULLSTOP GOLD said...
on Mar. 29 2012 at 4:17 am
FULLSTOP GOLD, Skipton, North Yorkshire, Other
13 articles 7 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
forever and ever and ever and ever will never be enough

lou, me thinks you just got bossed....

on Mar. 27 2012 at 7:43 am
Farihafarhana SILVER, Dhaka, Other
9 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
I believe in experience before decesion.

WRITTEN BY ME :D

firstly , it wasn't meant to beinspirational :P it was just a random thing i wrote in allpoetry in a contest called ' random' and as it is funny... well according to me.. i kinda posted it in teen ink not actually expecting a philosophical comment or anything :S and its just wierd that you even thought that i was trying to derieve something inspirational from this ;s

on Mar. 27 2012 at 5:42 am
Renegade9891 BRONZE, Skipton, Other
1 article 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Keep calm and use your powers of reason."
"Get bored and shoot the wall."
"Ideas are like buses, they never come when you need them to."

This is... awful? The lala dance. Come on. Not inspired. Not a great idea sorry, I didn't even find it amusing! What went on in your head when you wrote this? 


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