Full-Circle

It's raining
Silver streaks run down
Washing the world clean again
The droplets hit the ground
And dry up with a sizzle
Evaporating on contact
They don't die
But instead, rise up as steam
Swirling towards the sky
Back to the clouds
Where they will form together
And make more raindrops...





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AlaskaFrost This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 13, 2012 at 4:39 pm
Another fantastic poem!
 
Lilacs_Smell_Wonnerful This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 13, 2012 at 4:40 pm
Thank you! :D -Lilac
 
musicidraw said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 7:52 am

I love this poem it's so. . . simple but deep and complicated at the same time :) I hope I'll see more of your work.

 

 
Lilacs_Smell_Wonnerful This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 9:07 am

Thank you. :) I'm glad the the complicated part shines through, I thought it would be lost under the easy meaning, lol. ;) And more of my work is definitely to come, but if you click on my name, you could read some of the other 20-something poems I have written and published on TeenInk. XD Thanks again!!

-Lilac

 
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