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Falling to Fast
November 21, 2011
I didn't want to love you
I didn't want to look at you and feel that way
But for some reason
I did
Your blue eyes had just the right
amount of sparkle
Your laugh had just the right
amount of twinkle
Your voice just the right
amount of hope
Why couldn't I love you so?
Why couldn't I see that you were bad?
Why couldn't I tell that you didn't care about me?
I was just falling to fast.
© Tas H., Galesburg, IL
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TheInvisibleGirl BRONZE said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 8:25 pm
Yeah, it was a little oops! Thanks so much.
tweetiebruce PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 1:05 am
Hi there, great stuff but some things to help....
'Why couldn't i love you so?'
It might be my mistake but i though you did love...?
the second stanza was my favourite :D
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