November 21, 2011
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So ****e* up in the head.
Thinking about the dead.
But what can I do to stop
And put life back on top?

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ReadWriteBreathe said...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 6:55 pm
I really wish it was longer. But I do like what you have. Even though it's short, it's definitely emotional and powerful. Great job.
Angel_Writer replied...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 10:39 pm
Im working on a longer version actually. So hopefully i will have it finished soon. Just waiting til it sounds just right. :)
HateKnuckle said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 10:14 pm
Stupid censors. Interesting thought but it could be developed much more. You can do wonders with something like this. 3 stars.
Angel_Writer replied...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 10:19 pm
Yeah it was just a thought. At the moment I was too emotional to continue writing. But I am going to take that and make it into something bigger and better. :) Thank you.
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