She Cries

November 21, 2011
By RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?


Her blood drips,
falling to the floor
without making a sound
as do her tears.
They race each other to the floor
who will get there first.
Blood or Tears?

She cries and bleeds
never releasing the blood-stained knife
She clutches it tightly
until it cuts through her skin.
Finally dropping it,
she screams.
Holding her wounded hand
against her heart, she cries harder
louder!
not because of the wound in her hand
but because of the hole in her heart.



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on Dec. 15 2011 at 3:25 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

thanks and sure thing :)

on Dec. 14 2011 at 5:12 pm
XxMidnightKissxX SILVER, Hardinsburg, Indiana
7 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love me or hate me, I don't care which, just don't try and change me.

This is soooo good. Sounds like something I would write. :) If u could check out something of mine it'd be greatky appreciated. 

on Dec. 5 2011 at 5:54 pm
lindsaylyricist SILVER, Ormond Beach, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am invincible as long as I'm alive." -John Mayer

The emotion and passion in this short piece is so intense, before you even mention the knife. I love it. Keep writing!

on Nov. 28 2011 at 11:57 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

wow..so u understand?

on Nov. 28 2011 at 6:11 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

"Which will get there first?"

I love this.  I used to be suicidal, but I never cut, because I don't wear long sleeves, and I didn't want my family asking questions.  Anyways, this is amazing.


on Nov. 27 2011 at 3:19 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

thanks! :)

pinkowl BRONZE said...
on Nov. 27 2011 at 3:18 pm
pinkowl BRONZE, Tyrone, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
Jeremiah 29:11

 love the passion in this!

Loftus GOLD said...
on Nov. 27 2011 at 12:49 pm
Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
11 articles 1 photo 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own, and you know what you know. And you are the one who'll decide where you'll go." -Dr. Seuss

Totally amazing!


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