Life Is A Broken Mirror

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I will not acknowledge the difference
For I do not know
Who are you?
What am I?
Are we the same?
The corners of your mouth,
They point up,
While mine slide down,
Acting as pools to catch the drops of rain
Falling from my eyes.
Your eyes glisten
From laughter,
While mine stay shut.
Puffy and red.

But what does it mean?
Aren’t we all the same?
Life is not a mirror.
What you see
Is not always what you get





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Mr.Indescribable said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 6:01 pm
Wow. this is really good. i love the descriptive wording you use.
 
BeyondTheBrooke replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 6:05 pm
thx trent :)
 
sweetdeadlyallly said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 10:03 pm
i love this poem :)
 
BeyondTheBrooke replied...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 10:03 pm
aww thanks :)
 
cookiegirl said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 2:14 am
This is a great poem:). It is relatable, keep up the great work !
 
LivingMYLife replied...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 2:16 am
thanks cookie :)
 
Wonderment said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 6:37 pm
So amazing. I like it. Its very realtable. The discription really paints a picture. :)
 
LivingMYLife replied...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 6:46 pm
aww thanks thats what i strive for actually
 
Akane-Ree said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 6:26 pm

This is so true. beautifully written...

isn't life a box of chocolates or something? XD jkjkjkjk As said. good job.

 
LivingMYLife replied...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 6:28 pm
thank you...so much? as for the box of chocolate?, im not so sure maybe more like a grab bag. u got no idea whatcha gonna get.
 
Akane-Ree replied...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 6:36 pm
from forrest gump XD
 
LivingMYLife replied...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 6:46 pm

i know lol love that movie :)

 ("Run Forrest! Run!")

 
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