Life Is A Broken Mirror

November 21, 2011
By RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?


I will not acknowledge the difference
For I do not know
Who are you?
What am I?
Are we the same?
The corners of your mouth,
They point up,
While mine slide down,
Acting as pools to catch the drops of rain
Falling from my eyes.
Your eyes glisten
From laughter,
While mine stay shut.
Puffy and red.

But what does it mean?
Aren’t we all the same?
Life is not a mirror.
What you see
Is not always what you get



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on Nov. 28 2011 at 6:05 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

thx trent :)

on Nov. 28 2011 at 6:01 pm
Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant
Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall
Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me

Wow. this is really good. i love the descriptive wording you use.

on Nov. 26 2011 at 10:03 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

aww thanks :)

on Nov. 26 2011 at 10:03 pm
sweetdeadlyallly, Brampton, Other
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
drake - silence is a girls loudest cry you know she really hurt when she starts ignoring you

i love this poem :)

on Nov. 26 2011 at 2:16 am
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

thanks cookie :)

cookiegirl said...
on Nov. 26 2011 at 2:14 am
This is a great poem:). It is relatable, keep up the great work !

on Nov. 25 2011 at 6:46 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

aww thanks thats what i strive for actually

on Nov. 25 2011 at 6:46 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

i know lol love that movie :)

 ("Run Forrest! Run!")


on Nov. 25 2011 at 6:37 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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So amazing. I like it. Its very realtable. The discription really paints a picture. :)

on Nov. 25 2011 at 6:36 pm
Akane-Ree BRONZE, New City, New York
1 article 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"She\'s got it out for me BUT I WEAR THE BIGGEST SMILE"

from forrest gump XD

on Nov. 25 2011 at 6:28 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

thank you...so much? as for the box of chocolate?, im not so sure maybe more like a grab bag. u got no idea whatcha gonna get.

on Nov. 25 2011 at 6:26 pm
Akane-Ree BRONZE, New City, New York
1 article 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"She\'s got it out for me BUT I WEAR THE BIGGEST SMILE"

This is so true. beautifully written...

isn't life a box of chocolates or something? XD jkjkjkjk As said. good job.



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