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The Cat and the Mouse.

November 21, 2011
By Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
14 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live as if you'll die today. Dream as if you'll live forever.


They watch me unlock my locker,
as if I'm sawing my way through
as I unload my perfectly preserved books,
from my perfectly tidy locker
and they stare at me a little longer.

They sneer at me if I ask a question,
and look at me as if I asked 'is the sky blue miss?'
they talk about my clothes and appearance,
like I come from a developing country,
They don't care.

It's not only me they chew at,
Other little vulnerable mice,
who were unfortunate enough to get in their scent,
are trampled over and skinned of their pride and self-esteem,
and avoid coming to school for worry of spilling their spleen.

But she's the one they all follow,
she's the one they all laugh with,
she's the one who threatens me while they all sympathise with their eyes behind her back.
You'd think I am the mouse,
but in truth...
I am the cat.


The author's comments:
I just hate these b****s that roam the school thinking they're superior to everyone else. When in fact they're only insecure little a**holes taking their own self-hate out on little innocent children. The little posse are just hanging around to prevent them from being the next victim,

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on Nov. 26 2011 at 4:35 pm
SomethingLikeFire BRONZE, Mchenry, Illinois
1 article 1 photo 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Pippin: What about elevenses? Luncheon? Afternoon tea? Dinner? Supper? He knows about them, doesn't he?" -
-- The Lord Of The Rings: The Fellowship Of The Ring

i know what you mean. this is amazing. raw and amazing

on Nov. 26 2011 at 4:32 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
75 articles 0 photos 141 comments
Love it! I think it describes high school well somtimes and I like how the mouse is the cat in the end.

on Nov. 26 2011 at 4:31 pm
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 115 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

Love it you rock!

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on Nov. 26 2011 at 4:29 pm
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
8 articles 0 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever, love like there is no tomorrow, dance like there is no one watching.

Love the metaphor of the bully and victim! FANTASTIC!

Neytiri GOLD said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 5:20 pm
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
14 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live as if you'll die today. Dream as if you'll live forever.

Thank you honey!!! x x x x  <3<3

on Nov. 25 2011 at 5:11 pm
AnimaCordis GOLD, London, Other
13 articles 0 photos 131 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Evil is when the good do nothing"

Oh wow.... what an ending, i was not expecting that!