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High Beams

November 20, 2011
By unfortunatepoet BRONZE, Gilford, New Hampshire
unfortunatepoet BRONZE, Gilford, New Hampshire
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High Beams
We were happy, burn cruising
Across empty roads, fascinated
By the grey swirls, inside and out.
We rounded the corner, laughing,
Joking, breathing. Living.

The beams caught your eyes,
The truck caught your car
And threw your life,
Along with your body,
Out the window, into the rain.

When I wake I feel such pain,
That death may claim me as well.
But I fight it, and every morning
My eyes open.
I stayed alive,
Why couldn’t you?

The author's comments:
My cousin was like a brother to me, he helped me with every problem I ran into. He unfortunately died. While I was in the passenger seat.

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IzzyVT SILVER said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 4:32 pm
IzzyVT SILVER, N. Ferrisburg, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If the person you are talking to doesn&#039;t appear to be listening, be patient. It may simply be that he has a small piece of fluff in his ear.&rdquo; <br /> ― A.A. Milne, Winnie-the-Pooh

Your deep emotion about the incident is conveyed nicely though this poem. This must've been hard for you to write...do you feel better, though? With your feelings in the form of a poem?