November 11, 2011
you're so beautiful
I can't take my eyes off of you
your light green eyes
your crooked smile
rosy cheeks
the way your brown hair flows down over your eyes
the way your name sounds whenever I say it
you're so beautiful
yet you choose her
even though she could never love you as much as I do

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izyfizy said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 11:07 am
Oh my gosh! That's so sad! I'm sorry... (It IS a very good poem though!)
JamieNicole replied...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 3:41 pm
Thanks guys!
Illuminatus replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 6:49 am
hey it's really nice and even though i am a boy , it reaaly relates to my life ... loved it <3<3<3<3<3<3 !!
JamieNicole replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 12:26 pm
Thank you so much!
AnimaCordis replied...
Dec. 11, 2011 at 2:35 pm
I really like this poem becuase it doens't describe the usual idea of beauty, the character described is different looking. The ending is also really sad, overall a nice poem!
M2coolTodd replied...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 1:52 pm
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