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Would you like to buy a ticket?
said the master to the girl.
And how could I refuse
the lure of the whirl in your smile?

Snow glare was our disguise,
and gold-gilt poles that glittered
east-to-west, in a spectrum
of white and blue.

The winds blew ice flakes
into my eyes,
they bit and stung, narrowed,
my horizons shrank to you.

You were beautiful, so bright,
your gaily colored wooden horses
spun us
'round and 'round.

A perfect picture show
you painted
in mirrors and cracked glass,
I thought it showed me everything.

When dusk gathered,
and the flying flakes slowed
to a thinning veil of bright,

I saw our horses
could only run
in circles.

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Seelix said...
Jan. 29, 2012 at 6:02 pm
This was really creative! Great job =)
 
AfanenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 29, 2012 at 6:52 pm
Thanks a bunch!
 
BlameJuliet said...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 3:51 am
This is a very nice piece.
 
AfanenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 9:49 pm
Thank you!
 
K-Rhyme said...
Jan. 26, 2012 at 8:08 pm
very nice, brilliant.
 
AfanenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 29, 2012 at 10:41 am
Thank for reading it!
 
EEnriquez said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 10:35 pm
Nice work, keep it up.
 
AfanenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 11:08 pm
Thank you!
 
zhlenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 11:25 am
I liked the ending! check out my wrk.. "Stitched" and leave a review please!
 
AfanenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 7:13 pm
Thank you for reading!
 
Leanna S. replied...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 7:58 am
your welcome
 
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