Mother

November 6, 2011
By TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
8 articles 0 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever, love like there is no tomorrow, dance like there is no one watching.


A smile spreads across her face,
and I know it will be okay,
Her hands cup my chubby cheeks,
and she whispers in my ear,
“Everyone has their doubts,
everyone needs to fear.”
I look at her with a confused expression,
and she just laughs and ruffles my hair.
I look at her through my small eyes,
and see my mother.


The author's comments:
My Mother = My Savior
Luv Ya Mom ;)

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on Dec. 17 2011 at 8:34 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

Great job!  I love how simple it is, yet how satisfying it is for the reader.  Again, I appreciate the effort you put into having proper punctuation!  Keep writing!

TapTap SILVER said...
on Nov. 26 2011 at 4:52 pm
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
8 articles 0 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever, love like there is no tomorrow, dance like there is no one watching.

Aw don't cry! and thank you so much!

 


Neytiri GOLD said...
on Nov. 26 2011 at 4:37 pm
Neytiri GOLD, Hilo, Hawaii
14 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live as if you'll die today. Dream as if you'll live forever.

OH MY GOD I'M CRYING!!!!! That's such a beatiful job!! x x x x<3<3<3

on Nov. 26 2011 at 10:33 am
Awkwardness..., New Berlin, Wisconsin
0 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's chocolate, it's peppermint, it's delicious!" ~Cosmo Kramer, Seinfeld

Anothing AMAZING poem!!! Great job!!! Love it and KEEP WRITING!! :D

on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:21 pm
dbk1098 PLATINUM, Rockville, Maryland
20 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Very very good! Love the imagery!

 


TapTap SILVER said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 7:44 pm
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
8 articles 0 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever, love like there is no tomorrow, dance like there is no one watching.

Yep I showed you this before! And thnks!

Teresa said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 6:53 pm
Hey, isn't This the poem you showd me? It's good

TapTap SILVER said...
on Nov. 23 2011 at 1:55 pm
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
8 articles 0 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever, love like there is no tomorrow, dance like there is no one watching.

I just noticed the picture is a guy with his daughter, i thought it was a woman! :) just to make it clear my mother is NOT a guy!


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