November 6, 2011
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A smile spreads across her face,
and I know it will be okay,
Her hands cup my chubby cheeks,
and she whispers in my ear,
“Everyone has their doubts,
everyone needs to fear.”
I look at her with a confused expression,
and she just laughs and ruffles my hair.
I look at her through my small eyes,
and see my mother.

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CarrieAnn13 said...
Dec. 17, 2011 at 8:34 pm
Great job!  I love how simple it is, yet how satisfying it is for the reader.  Again, I appreciate the effort you put into having proper punctuation!  Keep writing!
Neytiri said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 4:37 pm
OH MY GOD I'M CRYING!!!!! That's such a beatiful job!! x x x x<3<3<3
thefamoustrapper replied...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 4:52 pm

Aw don't cry! and thank you so much!


Awkwardness... said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 10:33 am
Anothing AMAZING poem!!! Great job!!! Love it and KEEP WRITING!! :D
dbk1098 said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 4:21 pm

Very very good! Love the imagery!


Teresa said...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 6:53 pm
Hey, isn't This the poem you showd me? It's good
thefamoustapper replied...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 7:44 pm
Yep I showed you this before! And thnks!
thefamoustapper said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 1:55 pm
I just noticed the picture is a guy with his daughter, i thought it was a woman! :) just to make it clear my mother is NOT a guy!
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