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Lost in the wind

Not sure where I'm going,
but I'm on my way.
Can't tell when I'll reach you,
it's too soon to say.
I know you'll be there,
forever waiting.
To see you again,
is what I'm anticipating.
I was lost in the wind,
time moving too fast.
But I held on to the nostalgia,
I had for the past.




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Silver2blackThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 22, 2012 at 11:49 pm:
Wow, amazingly beautiful, I first it seemed boring, but the ending lit up the poem,and it DID turn out great, keep posting, I really admire this poem.
 
AcastilloThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 22, 2012 at 11:57 pm :
Haha ok thanks a bunch:D
 
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Shmelmo said...
Jan. 21, 2012 at 5:55 pm:
Thank you for your comment on my poem, thought I would check out some more of your work! I really like all of your writing, especially this one. It is so relatable and you rhymed the lines so well!! Thank you for sharing and please keep posting!! :)
 
AcastilloThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 21, 2012 at 6:16 pm :
Ok thanks I'll make sure to check out some more of you writing! :D
 
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