Raindrops

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Here I am dreaming again,
seeing you light up everything around me;
but it's cloudy,
as I'm here I feel something wet hit me;
I look up as raindrops fall upon me.

They want to tell you everything,
the raindrops that fills' me each day;
the raindrops that fall from my eyes when I'm cold,
all I want is for someone to understand me...

But I'm afraid if I tell you about these raindrops,
that you'll not understand me;
even though you lighten my face and make me smile,
see that's what I want;
but I'm frozen by the raindrops,
they keep me here...

I love the way you make me happy though,
the raindrops fade away;
my only worries' now though,
will you understand me when I tell you?
And if I start to fall telling you,
will you catch me when I do?





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A_Fate_Unknown said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 11:59 am

It never hurts to try.

but no one can understand unless you help them and let them in. Which is a problem with a lot of people, not saying you, just an observation, they want someone to understand but they want us to guess.

Guys dont have a psychic sense and we wont understand unless you talk to us.

 
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 2:05 pm
Thanks, now I'm not scared to tell him anymore..:) p.s. those are wise words.
 
J-Poetry-R replied...
Feb. 4, 2012 at 11:07 am
wow...even tho im a guy and never been thru this the poem is so good i can almost feel what your going thru. 5 stars and let me know of any other works i can check out
 
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 8:15 am
I love it when I get new Comments:) It makes me feel better..And I sure will let you know when I have something new up J-Poetry-R! Thanks
 
Toran replied...
Feb. 14, 2012 at 9:07 am
Beautiful, I know how it feels. And sometimes it's hard to brave. Other times, you just know you have too. Great job!
 
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Feb. 15, 2012 at 7:49 am
:) Thanks for tellin me that, makes me where I don't have to wounder about that kind of stuff! And thanks for commenting on this!
 
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