Raindrops

November 4, 2011
By SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!


Here I am dreaming again,
seeing you light up everything around me;
but it's cloudy,
as I'm here I feel something wet hit me;
I look up as raindrops fall upon me.

They want to tell you everything,
the raindrops that fills' me each day;
the raindrops that fall from my eyes when I'm cold,
all I want is for someone to understand me...

But I'm afraid if I tell you about these raindrops,
that you'll not understand me;
even though you lighten my face and make me smile,
see that's what I want;
but I'm frozen by the raindrops,
they keep me here...

I love the way you make me happy though,
the raindrops fade away;
my only worries' now though,
will you understand me when I tell you?
And if I start to fall telling you,
will you catch me when I do?


The author's comments:
" Written for someone I love and care about. He treats me right and like a man should. But I'm scared he won't understand me because not many people do."

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on Feb. 15 2012 at 7:49 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

:) Thanks for tellin me that, makes me where I don't have to wounder about that kind of stuff! And thanks for commenting on this!

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on Feb. 14 2012 at 9:07 am
Kipitama GOLD, Council Bluffs, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

Beautiful, I know how it feels. And sometimes it's hard to brave. Other times, you just know you have too. Great job!

on Feb. 6 2012 at 8:15 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

I love it when I get new Comments:) It makes me feel better..And I sure will let you know when I have something new up J-Poetry-R! Thanks

on Feb. 4 2012 at 11:07 am
J-Poetry-R SILVER, Enterprise, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"My greatest writings are on the pages of life"
- J-Poetry-R

wow...even tho im a guy and never been thru this the poem is so good i can almost feel what your going thru. 5 stars and let me know of any other works i can check out

on Dec. 8 2011 at 2:05 pm
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Thanks, now I'm not scared to tell him anymore..:) p.s. those are wise words.

on Dec. 1 2011 at 11:59 am
A_Fate_Unknown BRONZE, Enumclaw, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Those who make peacefull revolution impossible, Will make violent Revolution inevitable.

It never hurts to try.

but no one can understand unless you help them and let them in. Which is a problem with a lot of people, not saying you, just an observation, they want someone to understand but they want us to guess.

Guys dont have a psychic sense and we wont understand unless you talk to us.



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